Athena's Shield

[The Midnight Channel]

I'm very happy with this honestly...

CnC

 

[Just Dari]

While I dig the execution, the stock suffers. Its visibility is (face wise) bad (unless you wanted the focus on the hand given its sharper)


Feels like you can incorporate some warm colors in your small yet unrefined space.

 

[Lancelot]

Personally, I'm finding the text kills it a fair bit. Aside from that, I really have no complaints. aigis~

 

[Teiku 5]

the size of it makes the focal point issue even worse. i can't tell at all what i'm looking at.