In due time.
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In due time.
Well, be sure to make him awesome.
Yah Dark soldier would be awsome.
I was actually going to do a story told by Dark Soldier's point of view. But after the first chapter, I never got any response.... 
Make a Link I wanna read it.
I have something to do, but I wanted to get a short update up first. Rest of chapter soon.
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Chapter Four
"Dammit!" Terra exclaimed, banging his fist hard against the wall.
They were back in their dorm, counting the minutes until they were to leave for their mission. Aqua walked over to Terra and placed her hand gently on his shoulder.
"Calm down, Terra." She cooed.
Upon her touch, Terra turned his head to look at her. He ignored her and broke away from her hand, moving to his bed and collapsing on top of it. Aqua wandered to the other side of the room, sitting down next to Ven. Ven was staring intently at the clock on the wall, fidgeting in excitement. Aqua sighed and placed her hand on his knee.
"Ven," She started, "This isn't something to be excited about."
Ven paused his movement and looked at Aqua.
"Why?" He questioned.
"They're not telling us everything, Ven. Something else is happening here, and we're just being sent out to test Master Xehanort's situation. A recon of sorts."
"How do you kno--"
Terra sat up in his bed, speaking in a serious voice.
"It's true, Ven," He assured him, "The tone in the man's voice. The way he carefully described the situation. I don't know what, but something else is going on."
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Chapter Four
"Dammit!" Terra exclaimed, banging his fist hard against the wall.
They were back in their dorm, counting the minutes until they were to leave for their mission. Aqua walked over to Terra and placed her hand gently on his shoulder.
"Calm down, Terra." She cooed.
Upon her touch, Terra turned his head to look at her. He ignored her and broke away from her hand, moving to his bed and collapsing on top of it. Aqua wandered to the other side of the room, sitting down next to Ven. Ven was staring intently at the clock on the wall, fidgeting in excitement. Aqua sighed and placed her hand on his knee.
"Ven," She started, "This isn't something to be excited about."
Ven paused his movement and looked at Aqua.
"Why?" He questioned.
"They're not telling us everything, Ven. Something else is happening here, and we're just being sent out to test Master Xehanort's situation. A recon of sorts."
"How do you kno--"
Terra sat up in his bed, speaking in a serious voice.
"It's true, Ven," He assured him, "The tone in the man's voice. The way he carefully described the situation. I don't know what, but something else is going on."
To be continued...
Ahhhhh so far so good, Jake. Aw Poor Ven. Terra. XD
But then again, it leaves kinda wondering...
But then again, it leaves kinda wondering...
That was great! You'll surely get an exreme amount of votes in the KHI Best Writer poll.
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Awesome update as usual. Cannot wait to see what happens on their mission; this is getting really good.
nice. ven is so clueless. hes like pooh represents the innocence of a child
Please, do not spam these threads. That goes for both of them.
I will update when I update.
I will update when I update.
I guess all of us, saying "UPDATE PLEASE YOU'RE SO GOOD"
Er...sorry about that, JakeH... My posts on these threads will now be less...over capitalized..
Er...sorry about that, JakeH... My posts on these threads will now be less...over capitalized..
It's not that I don't enjoy your words of appraisal guys, just sometimes you can go a little overboard.
I'll be updating soon, hopefully. Lots of stuff going on at the moment.
Okay. I'll look forward to an update.
i love your story, but why do you make the informer guy seem like Angeal Hewley:mellow:
So, Jake, almost a month and no new chapter. I have to ask: Are you dead? If not get on to the blood shed already.
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