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Great poems,I especially liked Can't Move On,and Tell Me.
 

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Stavvy... This is amazing. You can really feel the emotion put into writing this, its the kind of stuff you cant just fake.
*gives a cookie*
 

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Meh. . .

Right now I honestly don't know what to think/feel.

I've said a lot. . .and I do mean it all.

She knows that, now that she's seen everything I've posted.

She says to give her time, and a chance with him. If that doesn't work out then everything could be fine. . .

I can respect that. So for now, I'm not sure when my next posting will be. . .
 

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^ Agreed.

These poems are already great.

I wonder how much better your poems will get when you are happy?Just a thought. ^_^
 

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Meh, I somehow doubt that my poems would be any good if I were happy. . .

We may see. . .time shall tell. . .

I don't know, talking with her helps, we still have a 'connection' like good friends. So that's. . .acceptable right now. . .kinda. . .
 

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I agree with DP, as wonderful as your poems are, I hope you don't have to be so sad. It's funny, sadness brings out the true emotion in your writing, it has in mine.
But I do wish you the best of luck, I really do.

Great poems by the way.
 

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I've got another:

Talking

I’m sure,
Talking helps,
Me get used to the idea.
And that’s good.

It still hurts,
But I’ve promised.
I’ll have to set my feelings aside,
And just try to make them work.

Even if I don’t like it,
Even if I wish it were different.
I’m not writing this for you to read,
I’m writing for the sake of it.

Meh. . .Dunno why I even wrote that. . .oh well.
 

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Yeah I liked this one as well but "Me get used to the idea" should have been "I got used to the idea''. But nevertheless I can tell by reading all of your poems so far that you're going through relationship problems.
 

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Well, written like a sentence it would be ," I'm sure talking helps me get used to the idea."

So it makes sense there.
 

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'Talking' is again a well written poem.

Looking forward to more of your work.
 

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hey take a look at my poem plz!
Whispers in the Shadows
Whispers in the Shadows
Calling out my name
Throwing me into lust
For sinful things

Blinding me from Light
Pushing me away
Making me trip
In the great race

But in the Light
There is hope
The power to seek me
To save me

The battles raged on
Light versus Shadow
In the end
Only one will stand

My blindfold removed
My hands untied
In front of me, Light
Not Dark

plz rate
 

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^ Eh,I don't think you're supposed to post your poem in Stavros' poetry thread.

Better make an own thread.
 

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GTFO MY THREAD!!!!

Kidding, but keep your poems to your own thread. . .

I may get some poems up. . .but right now this snow is trapping me inside. . .
 

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Aw... i actually thought you posted another, i was excited.

hm.. *waits patiently- mom took my freakin candy!!! :cursing:- for next poem*
 

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Well. . .it's cold. . .

Is that a poem? No? Meh. . .

I can see my breath while I sit here. . .


Damn. . .now I'm starting to want to write. .

But I have so many other things to do. . .
 
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