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Jace

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If it is alright i need help in modifying a character so that i dont god mod. I posted it below for review if anyone wants to read such along profile. I would be eternally gratefull if anyone could help me. Thanks.

This is it, History is to be extended later.

Name: Jace Jerevinan

Age: 17,521 years of age

Race: Chronos. They are extremely similar to humans though with different genetic and internal makeup. The Chronos are extremely intelligent, able to use the maximum capacity of their minds and bodies. This made them a powerfully strong warrior race as well as a magically advanced civilization capable of millions of technological marvels. Though this all couldn’t have been accomplished if it weren’t for their lifespan. The Chronos‘s affinity with the elements and magic have progressively over the years increased their life-force through their sheer exposure with it. Eventually this evolved the race into beings capable of living for thousands of years, the oldest, Eldar, is over 100,000 years old in human years.

Weapons/Armor:
Arcana: A zweigh hander created by a weapon smith god, Xemus. It had the power to kill other gods so he was put to death and most of his weapons destroyed but Arcana, his masterpiece, he had entrusted to the chrono who then passed it on to Jace to wield. Arcana is a catalyst of magic increasing the magic power of those who wield it. It also can cut through magical energy or channel it to be absorbed into the user. Because it can cut magical energy, magical beings or those made of energy, can be harmed by the blade. The blade by itself is impossible to carry due to its immense weight and size but due to Jace's armor and mastery of concrescent energy he is able to wield it easier than if a regular human wielded a stick. The blade can be summoned and sent away using the gods power inscribed on the blade. It is about three feet longer than a claymore and three feet wide. Its thickness is about 1 foot thick. Using the power of concrescent energy Arcana can also transform into more powerful versions of itself.

Arcania: Arcana’s second form slightly larger and wider. Much more powerful than its original form. Can more easily channel magic allowing for stronger and larger attacks. The edge has lines that go along it and smaller sword with a broad base and two holes in it take up most of the length of the blade as its design. On either side between this designs edge and the Arcania’s edge inscriptions run up both sides. This is Arcana's released form and does not require omnistate to unleash.

Arcanica, Omnistate: Arcana’s final form, much longer and tremendously more powerful. This weapon is invulnerable to almost any type of attack and cuts through all types of magic. The blade is much longer as is the handle. The guard becomes diamond shaped with hilt reaching the base of the blade through the design. There are also 3 hovering orbs outside the guard with metal plates attached to them pointing outwards in a slightly elongated trapezoid look with a curved base line to fit the orb in. The blade is about 70 inches long and 1 foot thick. It has taken on a diamond shaped base and the blade curves inward as it extends upward then curves out before reaching the triangular point. The inscriptions run up the blade as normal. Arcanica can only be achieved in omnistate and changes Jace’s armor into an impressive golden mech looking armor with pointy edges jutting backward and golden wings of an angel. The armor and sword constantly emit concrescent energy as an aura of an omni color(crystalline gold, think of supersaiyan aura with the unknown element color from crystal chronicles) . This form combines all the skills from the powers of the elemental forms with none of the weaknesses. All of Jace’s attacks are changed into sparking full power versions of themselves and are more than double their original effect and power. Jace can also combine elemental attacks and abilities for new extremely powerful results. Though the result of this power transcends mortal strength and can end up killing Jace’s body and fully destroying Jace’s soul.

Armor:
Ominus Terminus:
Jace has a full suit of white ivory armor made of a metal that regenerates when broken and becomes stronger. Over the years of battle the armor has grown to be impenetrable to conventional weapons and few types of extraordinarily powerful ones. This armor had been infused with concrescent energy which Jace has mastered how to use. There is an eternal amount within the suit and in the complete state it is in now cannot be used by any other than Jace or those with utter mastery of magic to its highest degree. It can absorb elemental attacks and change Arcana and Jace’s armor into different forms representing each element. Each form coming with different attacks. On his helmet there is installed a six set optical surveillance system so he can see in every direction in a variety of different conditions. The six systems allow Jace different views when certain conditions are met. These six systems combine for sight in almost any type of environment and hundreds of conditions, ranging from night to high-speed tracking. This better allows him to predict oncoming attacks that couldn’t normally be seen. All of these sights see 360 degrees and have surreal depth perception so surprise attacks are severely limited. Attached to his armor is also a long red cape with jagged edges that representing the turmoil of the Armageddon war, it is made of a foil that is lightweight and highly resistant to elemental damage.


Abilities:
Concrescent energy
Concrescent energy, a special power discovered by the chrono to be what is known as the governor element. This energy is a combination of not only every known element, but it also can absorb an unlimited amount of other types of energy that were previously unknown. This power can then be harnessed for eternal power or split into distinct energies or elements. Concrescent energy can also increase the physical, magical, and spiritual energy of those who control it directly and over time be infused into that person becoming another force at that person’s disposal. This energy cannot be normally used for in its raw form it contains no other power than its own. The governor power, which is a hollow energy that is useless until it absorbs other forms of energy. The more energy this power absorbs the more powerful it becomes. Concrescent energy also cannot be modified or controlled in any way besides the one who originally sets its purpose. This is because the energy that would be used to change concrescent energies purpose, for example change its direction after an attack, would be absorbed into it, increasing its power or having no effect at all. In Jace’s case it has absorbed thousands of energies and has become so powerful and intone with Jace that it cannot be used by any other being besides him. With this power Jace can cast a large amount of spells or use the governor power itself for extremely powerful attacks. Since the destruction of the Chronos and the races rebirth , His armor is the only existing relic left with this power.

Crescent Blade Arts- a series of offensive and defensive attacks. Here are the ones Jace can use.

Zantetsu- an impossibly fast cut that can instantly kill a single opponent. With Jace’s power he can instantly kill ordinary opponents who wouldn’t normally stand a chance against him
Shin-Zantetsu-An impossibly fast cut that can instantly kill multiple opponents. With Jace’s power he can kill multiple opponents in a flash.

Issenkire-multiple crescent energy slashes that can be unleashed at once.

Wangetsukire- The most basic form of the crescent blade. Spirit energy is combined with concrescent energy unleashing a crescent shaped slash capable of cutting most things in half.

Omoiwangetsukire-A stronger version of wangetsukire. A bigger energy slash that can be detonated into a concussive explosion by Jace. As with all concrescent slashes it has the power to cut almost everything in two.

Andoutowarakasshayuikire- A melee slash so powerful it cannot be blocked by any normal object. It is initiated by Jace getting into a stance by with his right hand on the hilt putting the hilt under the left arm so that the blade points diagonally upwards across the back and holding the left hand forward in a ninjutsu like pose. The slash is extremely fast and destructive with a reach longer than the blade itself, though it is directed in only one direction and leaves Jace open to attack. If blocked opponent can very well be knocked unconscious by the sheer magnitude of the force, all of Jace’s power is put into one of these slashes specializing in breaking extremely heavy defenses

Seishou shi-rudo- a defensive shield of concrescent energy that allows Jace to block an attack or regenerate any major injuries if necessary. Can’t be entered through or destroyed by normal means. Its main purpose is to deflect or absorb magic or physical attacks. Though can only protect from one given direction, like to the front or behind.

Kyouretsusumiyaka-Jace uses his kinetic and spiritual energy along with his armors concrescent energy to move two times faster. Can be used with Zantetsu, Shin Zantetsu or Andoutowarakasshayuikire to increase their speed and effectiveness.

Ultimate Attacks
Final Arcana- One of Jace’s ultimate attacks , also known as Godslay, Jace unleashes a Giant Crescent energy wave slash that has so much destructive power the surrounding area is destroyed and most living life forms wiped out. This attack was the famed move known to vanquish even gods. Jace used this attack to kill Zelphuren thousands of years ago. It has the power to destroy planets but can be toned down to defeat a single or a horde of opponents in one fell swoop. After this move is used a large amount of energy within the suit is drained along with Jace’s own spiritual energy and life-force and must be replaced by absorbing energy from the surrounding area leaving Jace open to attack.

Shenma Seu Sen- Jace’s Second ultimate attack. Shoots a massive beam of concrescent energy that can be redirected despite its large size. As with all energy attacks it travels at the speed of light and can only be dodged by teleporting or evading before the blast is actually fired. Jace used a form of this attack to vanquish the chaos being Selphis. This move requires Jace to charge concrescent energy before attacking.

Element
Jace has mastery of the core elements that make up the duoverse. With the power of concrescent energy he commands them with ease and even uses their power to transform his own, here are all of Jace’s elemental powers. In the forms lies Jace’s most major weakness, when in a form he is susceptible to its strengths as well as its weaknesses. Though while in each form an area affect is initiated which further shows the full power of the element. Jace can also absorb other core elements and gain new forms. All of the Crescent blade arts are altered when Jace enters a form usually increasing in power.

Fire
Pyre Arts: As with every other element Jace can control the power of fire to its highest degree. He can either create it from his suit or use the surrounding areas affinity with it. He does not need to say an incantation for he could end up overcharging a spell and use up more energy than necessary, though it can be done if need be.

Incindia
The form Jace takes when he fully absorbs the power of fire. In this form Arcana base becomes broader with a flame design, and the blade becomes black though the inscriptions can still be seen. Flames also leak from the blade and can be bigger or smaller based on energy exerted. His armor also turns red and flame metal like attachments are added giving the armor a fire theme. Jace uses a power called Fusion arts which is a repertoire of ultimate fire attacks based on his form. This form also increases Jace’s power of fire, strength and aggressiveness exponentially as if on a raging rampage, making this form one of the most ferocious to be seen. Is weak to water and ice attacks. In this form the heat of the surrounding area begins to increase until the area would become as hot as the surface of the sun though the process is different depending on the area, the heat would decrease when Jace is exposed to an opposing elements attack as well. Jace is intimidating, and arrogant in this form, he also laughs as if having fun.

Fusion Arts:
Coniecto- A massive superheated blast of fire that crystallizes rock, evaporates water, and creates a vacuum of air in an instant. Anything caught within the massive inferno is instantly burnt to a crisp.

Exuro - Jace can instantly ignite an object or enemy on fire by igniting the air around them with varying degrees of intensity. Enemies are warned to this attack as a shrill whistling sound that could be heard around them as the air rapidly moves as it is heated allowing a small window of evasion.

Ignis Superna – The fire forms ultimate attack unleashes a supernova like blast similar to Coniecto but much more powerfully destructive. The fire is so hot it resembles light as it spreads in every direction molecularly fusing substances and incinerating others creating extremely hard crystals and a black scourge in its wake.

Water and Ice
Aqua Arts
Jace uses these arts to control the power of water. This ranges from summoning it from the moisture in the air, to using it as a weapon. With water he can even control it within the body of an organic being to kill them from the inside.

Gelu Arts
Jace can use these arts to freeze his opponents or cause massive damage with frozen weapons and attacks

Glacias unda
The form Jace takes when he becomes fully absorbs the power of water and ice. In this form Arcana gets smaller and becomes a crystal with a dark violet purple color. The shrill cold around it is so cold the molecules are frozen into a solid form and morphed into an extremely sharp edge. Jace’s armor also turns blue and has crystalline features. In this form Jace uses Zero Arts which is an arsenal of Water and Ice ultimate attacks based on this form. This form enhances Jace’s magic power exponentially. This form is susceptible to fire attacks. During battle the area could start to flood with water or the temperature could begin to drop depending on the situation. It could freeze all the way down to absolute zero and can be hastened by Jace’s attacks. Jace is condescending and cold in this form.

Zero Arts
Agua Bovis – shoots hundreds of water bullets that can be created from the moisture in the air or from the ground at the target with skin piercing, and bone crushing force.

Pluvia tripudio- summons a heavy rainstorm that can be used to aid in creating water bullets or other attacks, also enhances Jace’s form. Jace can also use these to see where the opponent is as they are hit by water droplets.

Maelstrom- creates a crushing whirlpool that doubles on itself sucking the victim to its depths and crushing them with the tremendous pressure of water.

Profundus congelo – A freezing attacks that freezes the entire area slowing most molecular movement. This attack can spread throughout the air and cause blizzards and snowstorms to erupt from the surrounding area.

Ovis gelu – A spell that gradually begins lowering the temperature of the surrounding area. This also increases the power of Jace’s form and attacks until the ultimate attack can be performed.

Absolute Zero – Glacias unda’s ultimate ice attack. Completely halts all molecular activity and absorbs the light in the atmosphere making it pitch black. Pure perfect crystals are formed and can be used as ice fang attacks to finish off a frozen opponent.

Wind
Aero Arts
Jace uses this power to control wind. It can create blades of air or a shield of hardened oxygen. Tornadoes can also be made with these arts as well as quickening Jace’s movement and other abilities. This art allows Jace to augment others as well as himself.

Ventus
The form Jace assumes once he fully absorbs the power of air. Arcana’s tip becomes rectangular and its base triangular. The blades edge remains its natural metal while its inside turns a light nature green with swirling lines moving up the blade representing wind. There are also three rectangular holes running up the blade. Jace’s armor turns the nature green of his blade and has metal attachments that represent wind. This is Jace’s third fastest form. In this form the battle field slowly begins forming a large mesocyclone with smaller ones around the center. Eventually the vortexes will form and progress into a multivortex tornado. Each tornado within which varies in number would increase from F0 until it reaches F5. In this form Jace uses the Squall Arts for use of ultimate wind attacks. This form enhances evasion, fatigue and vitality exponentially. It is weak against earth attacks. Jace talks a lot in this form, as if like a mentor

Squall Arts
Flatus Denique – Fires a small concussive blast of air that is used primarily to send the opponent flying. Is extremely powerful and can crush rocks with a direct hit.

Aer Vesica – Most used attack in this form, Jace attacks with blades of air that are unseeable to the naked eye. These blades are can be weak enough to cause a paper cut, or strong enough to lacerate through an entire limb.

Incidere – An instant kill technique that uses the tornadoes that are created in the area to have the ability to send out hundreds of blades of air in every direction moving with extremely high speed. If it hits it would feel like a gust of wind but would cut like hundreds of swords with high power. This is a continuous spell that would continue as long as there is a tornado created.

Earth
Geo arts
Jace uses the power of the element of earth to create earth attacks ranging from boulder projectiles to fissures and earthquakes. This form also can create metals and crystal attacks for massive damage. Jace can also increase the defense of himself and others.
Terra
The form Jace assumes when he fully absorbs the power of the earth. This is Jace’s slowest form but also his most impenetrable. Being able to coat shield himself with metal and crystals of varying strengths and create alloys that reflect energy or absorb it in an instant. Arcana disappears in this form becoming one with the heaven and earth giving Jace the ability to attack from the land and more freedom to fight with different weapons. Jace’s armor also becomes brown with earthen metal like attachments. The theme can change into a metal or crystal theme also. Jace can’t use any high-speed attacks or disappear from sight in this form making that a weakness. In this form Jace uses Gaia arts which compose of ultimate earth attacks. Jace’s defense is increased exponentially in this form. Jace is silent in this form.

Gaia arts
Humus Tumulosus- Jace creates a Fissure that leads deep into the planets mantle. Can be opened and closed constantly and wide for large opponents. It closes with the crushing force of the planet.

Contremisco – An augment spell. This gives Jace the ability to hit his opponent with the force of an earthquake so powerful it could send a shockwave through an organic body and rupture every organ before blowing the body to pieces.

Geo partum – Jace gains the power to create crystals and metal alloys from the earth using it for blades, attacks, and even as overlay armor. Can be exceptionally devastating when metal and crystal is combined to create an alloy capable of shearing through most known substances.

Lightning
Levitas Arts
Jace use these arts to control lightning and electricity in all its forms. This ranges from bolts from the sky to streams shot from the hand. Electro magnetism and thunderstorms can be created to increase the power and number of types of attack.

Desumo
Jace’s second fastest form. Fully absorbing the power of lightning Jace can travel close to the speed of light, moving around the battlefield faster than the opponent can blink. Arcana increases greatly in length and decreases in width and thickness. The blade hovers above the hilt, a ball of pure energy separating the two with three balls hovering around the hilt with rods jutting out from them. Inscriptions run up the length of the blade and the blade sparks with electricity. Jace’s turns purple and the armor gains a jetsream like appearance that leaks electricity. In this form Jace uses the Blitz Arts in this form. Jace’s speed is increased exponentially in this form. While in this form a massive thunderstorm begins to form and increases in power and rains down bolts of lightning on the field. Eventually large positron channels open up for larger and larger bolts of lightning that have the power to destroy anything they touch. Jace can speak telepathically in this form

Blitz Arts
Bellicum – Jace supercharges the opponent’s positron emotion making all lightning attacks be forced in their direction, moving or standing still. It can be avoided as a channel must be opened between Jace and the opponent momentarily for this to work.

Nex telum – Allows Jace to transform himself into a form of energy that can travel close to the speed of light, faster than his mass would normally allow. With concrescent energy Jace can do this without using the shape of his body. While this spell is activated Jace can appear and disappear with great speed and attack faster than a normal organic brain can comprehend.

Penetro Dimension Levitas – a devastating lightning bolt from another dimension that travels at the speed of light with such devastating force it can cut a planet in two.

Light
Lux Lucis Arts
Jace uses this power to control light in all its forms. He can bend light around him and become completely invisible. Or emit beams of concentrated particle beams of light that emit immense amount of light based energies.

Luminarium
Jace’s fastest form. In this form Jace can travel at the speed of light by turning himself into a form of energy like Levitas but Jace turns into a ball of energy to retain a stable organic molecular structure. Jace can then burst out of this form whenever he needs to attack. Though it is when Jace is in this form that he is susceptible to damage. In this form Jace can only be seen as a flash of light. Jace’s armor becomes a more upgraded form of its self appearing more paladin like than any other form. In this form Arcana increases in width and length. A double sided black blade with silver edges and split down the middle. Arcana’s blade then covers most of this split with a blade on both sides of this sword which isn’t attached to the hilt. The blade is pointed at both sides and inscriptions run up its length. The guard is a bigger rectangular look with lines on it in a square and rectangle design. The handle is slightly longer and wrapped in a cloth for extra grip in high speeds and a keychain hangs off the end. In this form Jace’s uses the holy arts which are ultimate attacks based on this form. While in this form the area becomes increasingly brighter and especially damaging to undead foes. Jace is completely calm and merciful in this form. This form is both weak against darkness, and strongest against it.

Holy Arts
Sanctus ruina – Emits a deadly holy light that engulfs targets incinerating them in a holy flare. The only salvation from this attack is in darkness

Talio – During the duration of this spell all damage Jace incurs is bided and released via a riposte attack. It is a concussive force that is equivalent to double the damage received and is activated by Jace when he is near his opponent make it hard to dodge as it has an area effect. The power of the move is signified by Jace’s armor glowing whiter and whiter with more energy.

Censura – Calls down a massive beam of light that directly attacks the magical power of on opponent completely draining it to zero if it even touches the opponent

Indignatio – Calls forth 3 immortal heavenly arc angels to assist in battle. They know a variety of spells and are extremely powerful. Kain, Lucius, and Michael are their names. If they are defeated they return to heaven and do not return. This move can only be used once. These three arc angels have the power to create the lake of fire and brimstone which can infinitely destroy any matter in the universe (as stated by scriptures). Opponent can be thrown into the lake and destroyed with no possibility of returning.

Dark
Atra Arts
Power Jace gains when he completely submerses himself in darkness. Jace’s most adaptable form of magic. He can engulf his opponents in darkness, turn enemies to pawns, or simply destroy them with utter dark matter and energy.

Umbra
Jace’s dark form. In this form he is no control of his consciousness and is completely controlled by darkness. Arcana in this form is completely morphed into a blade named Necrumbyss. It is double sided with black blade and silver edges. The base of the blades also become more diamond shaped as it nears the bottom. At the base of the blades are closed eyes in the blade and the handle is covered in cloth with a black cross keychain on the end. Jace’s armor turns pitch black with demonic attachments to it. In this form Jace can move as fast as the shadows but moves slower in the light. In this form the light dims in the area until area becomes pitch black. This happens faster than any of the other forms because all the light energy and heat in the area is completely absorbed into Jace except for that of the opponent. So light cannot travel in any direction. In this form Jace uses the Unholy Arts. His defense is decreased in this form and his speed is more than doubled. Also he is ruthless, erratic like a beast, and merciless in this form.

Unholy Atra
Nex Umbra – An attack that engulfs the opponent in darkness and sucks their life force. Can be dodged but can be created to attack from the shadows.

Atrum Capulus – creates a dimensional area around Jace and the target that completely blocks all of the enemies senses, this includes sensing, seeing, tasting, hearing, and smelling. All but the power to feel is taken away. Jace can attack from any direction or all directions and this dimension cannot be escaped until Jace is hurt or the opponent uses an utterly devastating attack to escape.

Obscurum Pectus – Jace takes uses the darkness in a person heart to make them his pawn, the power of this move varies on two factors. The level of darkness in his opponent’s heart. The dark power Jace has. Jace’s power increases based on the terrain or area affect of his armor. If his opponent is evil it is extremely powerful while the more light the person has in their heart the weaker this spell. If Jace can’t control the person he can control parts of their body, or destroy parts of their heart with dark arcanic spikes.


Quick History:
The Chronos
The Chronos were once known as the oldest race in what was known as the duoverse. A multidimensional plane, separate from this one that encompassed all that ever existed and ever would exist. They were superior to all other forms of life in almost every way. They were extremely similar to humans though with different genetic and internal makeup. The Chronos were extremely intelligent, able to use the maximum capacity of their minds and bodies. This made them a powerfully strong warrior race as well as a magically advanced civilization capable of millions of technological marvels. Though this all couldn’t have been accomplished if it weren’t for their lifespan. The Chronos‘s affinity with the elements and magic have progressively over the years increased their life-force through their sheer exposure with it. Eventually this evolved the race into beings capable of living for thousands of years, the oldest, Eldar, is over 100,000 years old in human years. Though the Chronos were a nearly perfect race their own strength was what crushed them.

On the advent of destruction
on the planet which was known then as Raeth, there were wars between the chronos and a race of monsters known as Desinos. They were demon like beasts that hungered to conquer Raeth and kill all that remained of the old world. Desino warriors were the most ferocious of its kind and were able to hold their own against the chronos. The result was Armageddon on a massive scale. Though the chrono were superior in skill, the Desino far outnumbered them and in a desperate attempt at victory the chrono began two projects in hope of survival. Ominus Terminus (Alls end): A magnificent fusion of magic and technology. This created by the best of the chrono arch sages and technicians, was a force called concrescent energy. The ability for a single force to absorb all the other elements and use them individually or combine them for greater power. This power was then infused into a suit of a synthesized ivory colored alloy called eternium. Its use was intended to be mass produced and distributed among the Chronos’s best warriors but a young boy, about 15 in equivalence to human years, Became its wearer. He was then employed as a warrior and fought in the war. Sometimes single handedly annihilating entire armies using his unnaturally high spiritual power and the suits energy. The second project Atra fatumdie (Black doomsday): harnessing an unknown force they had discovered on the edge of the universe the chronos aspired to use it as a weapon, the result completely destroyed almost all life on Raeth and set amok an almost unstoppable power. The power the chronos named Res Ruina. Jace was saved by his suit and in order to save the universe from this energy that had the power to destroy matter collected the original forms of magic into his armor increasing the power of concrescent energy and giving him knew forms and weapons. Eventually he collected them all including light and dark and obtained what was called Omni state which allowed him to combat chaos. Two beings Selphis and Zelphuren were his enemies. Selphis a mock image of him in his dark form and a chaos being, and Zelphuren the chrono who first discovered chaos and wished to control it. After defeating them Jace went back to Raeth and began to rebuild the world with the remaining chrono renaming the world Serenity for its peace and hope for a new beginning.


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Any Other Info: Jace rarely fights due to his now more peaceful nature and if forced would fight using a stick or regular sword. He would only use Arcana as a last resort.
He also can never get out of his armor as it fused to his body becoming his exoskeleton when he last went all out in Omni state.
 

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Well to answer you simply, a character like this is more a manifest used for battling than anything else.

If you were to use him in an rp, I would either break down his powers, or choose some aspects of them based on the rp you wish to join. Actually he would be good for one of my rps right now lol. You can respond, or PM me.
 
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