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Charlie
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Hello =] Like the title states, this little creation of a thread is going to be dedicated to the various poems & workings that I've done throughout this past year. I wasn't sure if it'd be wise to place this here, but a mod-friend of mine suggested that'd it'd be best.
Anyway, here's one of my favorites, made in April of this year. Possible dedication to an experience that I had at the dawn of 07' (or a breakup).
Sorry if it comes off a wee' bit emo. x.x Hope you enjoy!
Little Wing
That night I slept so soundlessly
Waiting so patiently for your words of trust to give me away
We met at the carousel that one night in time
Staring through the other’s eyes
A whisper of magic
I promised you a future
On a day that only sacrifice held
You gave me sight
And I treasured your heartless insides
So meaningful and dry
You called yourself a dreamer
Plagued only by your touch turning slowly to ash
I will never forget
On that one day when I fell to the floor
Desperate to hold onto that one fragment of you
Fading so freely into the sunlight
On this day, you repress me
Recalling me as your most precious disease
I see myself as your childhood
Never thought of fondly, but needed if you wish to stand
You’ve done everything on your own
Gave yourself your own intelligence
Yet avoided to present the ability to forgive-
It was you who made yourself bleed
I rested comfortably in the wings of change
Waiting for you to propose or fly away
Ah, you took off like a falcon didn’t you?
Sailed like a lovely angel in my mind
We parted ways, but you repressed that one lesson I taught you
I gave you my vulnerability
Wrapped carefully in a box during Christmas time
I recalled that you suffered for my absence
I took hold of you and surrounded you like a vine
You chose to forget-
Out of all of those days where you stood so confidently over me
That it wasn’t you who held the ability to heal & to change
I thought that you would at least come to me with forgiveness
But now you’ve chosen to stand
On your own
In a place where I sleep soundlessly-
And you wake so shamefully as a man
///The next set will come shortly. Again, I pray that this is in the right section. Critique, comments, opinions, etc would be much appreciated.
Thank you <3
Anyway, here's one of my favorites, made in April of this year. Possible dedication to an experience that I had at the dawn of 07' (or a breakup).
Sorry if it comes off a wee' bit emo. x.x Hope you enjoy!
Little Wing
That night I slept so soundlessly
Waiting so patiently for your words of trust to give me away
We met at the carousel that one night in time
Staring through the other’s eyes
A whisper of magic
I promised you a future
On a day that only sacrifice held
You gave me sight
And I treasured your heartless insides
So meaningful and dry
You called yourself a dreamer
Plagued only by your touch turning slowly to ash
I will never forget
On that one day when I fell to the floor
Desperate to hold onto that one fragment of you
Fading so freely into the sunlight
On this day, you repress me
Recalling me as your most precious disease
I see myself as your childhood
Never thought of fondly, but needed if you wish to stand
You’ve done everything on your own
Gave yourself your own intelligence
Yet avoided to present the ability to forgive-
It was you who made yourself bleed
I rested comfortably in the wings of change
Waiting for you to propose or fly away
Ah, you took off like a falcon didn’t you?
Sailed like a lovely angel in my mind
We parted ways, but you repressed that one lesson I taught you
I gave you my vulnerability
Wrapped carefully in a box during Christmas time
I recalled that you suffered for my absence
I took hold of you and surrounded you like a vine
You chose to forget-
Out of all of those days where you stood so confidently over me
That it wasn’t you who held the ability to heal & to change
I thought that you would at least come to me with forgiveness
But now you’ve chosen to stand
On your own
In a place where I sleep soundlessly-
And you wake so shamefully as a man
///The next set will come shortly. Again, I pray that this is in the right section. Critique, comments, opinions, etc would be much appreciated.
Thank you <3