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Hey guys, been a while hasn't it? I've been rewriting the first 8 chapters of my original fanfic so that the share the same point of view as chapters 9 onwards, I've only done chapter 1-3 (at least I think) and need to work on getting the other ones rewritten, so bear with me if I'm a little slow with this.
For those that haven't read this before, this is a KH story I wrote based on a timeline of another user's story. It takes place one year after a story called 'Hearts of Twilight' created by the user Lycanthrope or Frozen Fate/Captain Js as some others may know him, its still on the site I think if you look hard enough, otherwise I will ask if he can either repost it or put it somewhere to download.
But enough about that, you're here to read a story right? Well here it is.
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Kingdom Hearts: Absolution's Reign
Chapter One: A Reign's Beginning
My name is Draco Carvhall and I had been spending the last week on vacation at the beach with his family after enduring a grueling year of high school at the Twilight Town High School. I sat on the beach lounging around listening to his MP3’s while everyone else was swimming around and having fun, my sister yelled out “Hey Draco, come on in the water’s great!”
I stood up and thought “Oh well… why not?”, I put away my things and put my swimsuit on and jumped in. After an hour of swimming, we all got out and I went to get changed into my regular clothes, a black dragon shirt with the words “Teneo thy Fatum” which was Latin for “Know thy Destiny” and gray denim jeans.
After I had finally finished changing, I heard my sister scream. In desperation I yanked the door open and yelled, “What’s going on?” I gasped as I looked out. Hundreds of black shadows surrounded my family and started to close in. With no hesitation, I quickly ran to my bag and pulled out a pair of burst handguns which I had always carried with me.
I started firing at them but the bullets passed completely through them, doing no damage whatsoever. I kept firing and firing until one of the shadows knocked me into a sand bank, I yelled in pain and saw all of the shadows coming towards me as my family started to yell for help, but no one came, just silence replied.
As I sat there watching the shadows come ever closer I bowed my head and thought to myself solemnly “This is it for me” as my family continued to yell for help. Then, in a split second all of the shadow leapt on me and I found myself being overcome with the black darkness, engulfing me in its evil grip. But just before darkness had completely overcome me, a bright light suddenly shined in front of me.
From the light, I heard a voice saying “Don’t give up, you have the power to defeat the darkness within you!” The voice… I had heard it somewhere before, like a distant memory but I just couldn’t remember.
The bright light knocked all of the shadows away and I suddenly stood up feeling re-energized, and then a blade appeared in my hand. I jumped back in surprise and then examined at the blade, it was white with a gold chain running down it and also had a gold handle and was shaped like a key. A flashback of sorts came to me of myself wielding the blade, but I had no memory of that happening.
As I stared at the gleaming blade, I felt a strange power starting to flow through me, then my arm lifted itself and I yelled something as if something was controlling me somehow. The force of the yell caused several shadows to disappear and then hearts floated up into the air from the dark shadows.
I stood there in amazement and then heard a voice in his head saying, “I have finally returned to you”.
“What do you mean ‘returned to me’? I’ve never seen a blade like you in my life” I said confusingly.
“So the amnesia has yet to lift then” the blade said in a depressed voice, if you could even sound depressed in a mental voice.
“What are you talking about?”
“Never mind, my name is Absolution and I am a keyblade, a blade of exceptional power and strength” it said to me.
“Uh, nice to meet you, I’m Draco”
“Well then you better do something about these shadows then eh?”
“Well put, it’s payback time!”
I took the blade in both hands and rushed at the shadows in full force. One at a time I destroyed the dark shadows with Absolution as my family stood there in disbelief, but a hint of relief was there too, as if they knew about the blade.
After I had finished the last shadow, I stood there relieved, but then more shadows appeared and I leapt back saying “There’s more of these things?!? Damn it!”.
I then thought back to how I destroyed several of them by using that yell, I figured that Absolution gave me some sort of psychic powers. Thinking this I raised my right arm and yelled hard and all of them vanished in an instant.
However more shadows appeared in their place. I kept destroying wave after wave of shadows and before long the last wave disappeared. I fell to the ground exhausted my energy severely depleted, as I saw my family rushing over towards me.
“What on earth were those things?” I said out loud.
“My god they found you again” My sister said in a sad voice
“What do you mean, you know what those things are?” I asked
“Don’t worry about it Draco, you aren’t hurt are you?” my mother asked.
“I’m fine mum, just a bit exhausted ”
I just started to catch my breath when the ground started to shake, “What now?” I groaned. Out of the ocean, a huge monster rose, but it seemed different from the other creatures.
“Oh hell no! Another one of these things?” I complained.
I looked at it and thought, “No, this one is different from those other creatures”. I could sense that this monster wasn’t the same as the shadows because I could sense that this being only carried half a heart. I tried to lift up my blade but had used the last of my energy destroying the shadows.
“We have to get out of there quickly” I exclaimed.
My family agreed and my dad, Zachary or Zack as he liked to be called, lifted me up and carried me to the train station which quite far away. We tried to run as fast as we could, but the creature was rapidly approaching from behind. My dad then dropped me out of exhaustion and the creature was soon towering above us.
I tried to lift my blade again but still had not recovered my strength from the battle before. The creature stared at us leering, then it reached down to try and grab me, but before it could do so it just disappeared. With a strange black and white mist surrounding it, it quickly dissipated as it vanished into thin air. Standing in the monsters place was a teenager about the same age as me, he wore a black jumpsuit similar to those a drifter would wear and carried a long dark blade.
The teenager walked over to me and asked, “Are you all right?”
“I’m okay, thanks for saving us” I replied
“No need to thank me” he replied
Then my sister Hayley said “ It's you, it's nice to see you again”
"Wait, you know him?" I asked confusingly.
"She does know me yes, in a way" the teenager replied to my question.
"Well whatever, anyway who are you? I don't think I've ever seen you round here before" I commented.
“Oh, my apologies my name is Xonic, Xonic Cryoliz and I live in Twilight Town, same as you” Xonic explained. “So you have returned at last Absolution, it’s been a while” he said to my blade.
“It’s good to see you too, it has been too long” Absolution replied.
“Wait a minute, how do you know my blade’s name?” I asked
After hearing this Xonic appeared deep in thought and said in a soft voice, “So your memories even with your keyblade are still locked away”.
“Keyblade? What’s a Keyblade?” I asked.
Xonic turned towards me and explained, “A Keyblade is a sacred blade given only to those who have a pure heart in light, darkness or even of the twilight, which you have been chosen as”
I was stunned and then persistently asked, “Do you know what was it that I did before? I just yelled and those shadows disappeared”.
“Each keyblade has it’s own special effect or ability, in your case it seemed to bestow you with what seemed to be psychic abilities and that is an ability not common in keyblades” Xonic explained and then said in a low voice with a hint of disbelief “Hmm I guess his magic was stronger than I thought"
I sat there trying to figure out what was going on but I thought that it could wait for later and asked “Look Xonic would you be able to help us get back to Twilight Town? We’re exhausted from trying to get away from those… things”.
“Sure” Xonic replied, he lead us to the Train Station while my parents struggled to carry me to the station because I was still tired from before. When they reached the station Xonic turned around and said “Well here we are”, “Look Draco if you need to discuss this matter some more in private, come and see me at my house and I’ll tell you everything." Xonic began to say then lowered his voice and said "I hope you regain your memories soon”
I heard this and asked "Wait a minute what do you mean-" but was cut off by Xonic saying “Well, so long!” and vanished in front of our eyes. With that we boarded the train, and traveled home after a more than hectic day at the beach.
For those that haven't read this before, this is a KH story I wrote based on a timeline of another user's story. It takes place one year after a story called 'Hearts of Twilight' created by the user Lycanthrope or Frozen Fate/Captain Js as some others may know him, its still on the site I think if you look hard enough, otherwise I will ask if he can either repost it or put it somewhere to download.
But enough about that, you're here to read a story right? Well here it is.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kingdom Hearts: Absolution's Reign
Chapter One: A Reign's Beginning
My name is Draco Carvhall and I had been spending the last week on vacation at the beach with his family after enduring a grueling year of high school at the Twilight Town High School. I sat on the beach lounging around listening to his MP3’s while everyone else was swimming around and having fun, my sister yelled out “Hey Draco, come on in the water’s great!”
I stood up and thought “Oh well… why not?”, I put away my things and put my swimsuit on and jumped in. After an hour of swimming, we all got out and I went to get changed into my regular clothes, a black dragon shirt with the words “Teneo thy Fatum” which was Latin for “Know thy Destiny” and gray denim jeans.
After I had finally finished changing, I heard my sister scream. In desperation I yanked the door open and yelled, “What’s going on?” I gasped as I looked out. Hundreds of black shadows surrounded my family and started to close in. With no hesitation, I quickly ran to my bag and pulled out a pair of burst handguns which I had always carried with me.
I started firing at them but the bullets passed completely through them, doing no damage whatsoever. I kept firing and firing until one of the shadows knocked me into a sand bank, I yelled in pain and saw all of the shadows coming towards me as my family started to yell for help, but no one came, just silence replied.
As I sat there watching the shadows come ever closer I bowed my head and thought to myself solemnly “This is it for me” as my family continued to yell for help. Then, in a split second all of the shadow leapt on me and I found myself being overcome with the black darkness, engulfing me in its evil grip. But just before darkness had completely overcome me, a bright light suddenly shined in front of me.
From the light, I heard a voice saying “Don’t give up, you have the power to defeat the darkness within you!” The voice… I had heard it somewhere before, like a distant memory but I just couldn’t remember.
The bright light knocked all of the shadows away and I suddenly stood up feeling re-energized, and then a blade appeared in my hand. I jumped back in surprise and then examined at the blade, it was white with a gold chain running down it and also had a gold handle and was shaped like a key. A flashback of sorts came to me of myself wielding the blade, but I had no memory of that happening.
As I stared at the gleaming blade, I felt a strange power starting to flow through me, then my arm lifted itself and I yelled something as if something was controlling me somehow. The force of the yell caused several shadows to disappear and then hearts floated up into the air from the dark shadows.
I stood there in amazement and then heard a voice in his head saying, “I have finally returned to you”.
“What do you mean ‘returned to me’? I’ve never seen a blade like you in my life” I said confusingly.
“So the amnesia has yet to lift then” the blade said in a depressed voice, if you could even sound depressed in a mental voice.
“What are you talking about?”
“Never mind, my name is Absolution and I am a keyblade, a blade of exceptional power and strength” it said to me.
“Uh, nice to meet you, I’m Draco”
“Well then you better do something about these shadows then eh?”
“Well put, it’s payback time!”
I took the blade in both hands and rushed at the shadows in full force. One at a time I destroyed the dark shadows with Absolution as my family stood there in disbelief, but a hint of relief was there too, as if they knew about the blade.
After I had finished the last shadow, I stood there relieved, but then more shadows appeared and I leapt back saying “There’s more of these things?!? Damn it!”.
I then thought back to how I destroyed several of them by using that yell, I figured that Absolution gave me some sort of psychic powers. Thinking this I raised my right arm and yelled hard and all of them vanished in an instant.
However more shadows appeared in their place. I kept destroying wave after wave of shadows and before long the last wave disappeared. I fell to the ground exhausted my energy severely depleted, as I saw my family rushing over towards me.
“What on earth were those things?” I said out loud.
“My god they found you again” My sister said in a sad voice
“What do you mean, you know what those things are?” I asked
“Don’t worry about it Draco, you aren’t hurt are you?” my mother asked.
“I’m fine mum, just a bit exhausted ”
I just started to catch my breath when the ground started to shake, “What now?” I groaned. Out of the ocean, a huge monster rose, but it seemed different from the other creatures.
“Oh hell no! Another one of these things?” I complained.
I looked at it and thought, “No, this one is different from those other creatures”. I could sense that this monster wasn’t the same as the shadows because I could sense that this being only carried half a heart. I tried to lift up my blade but had used the last of my energy destroying the shadows.
“We have to get out of there quickly” I exclaimed.
My family agreed and my dad, Zachary or Zack as he liked to be called, lifted me up and carried me to the train station which quite far away. We tried to run as fast as we could, but the creature was rapidly approaching from behind. My dad then dropped me out of exhaustion and the creature was soon towering above us.
I tried to lift my blade again but still had not recovered my strength from the battle before. The creature stared at us leering, then it reached down to try and grab me, but before it could do so it just disappeared. With a strange black and white mist surrounding it, it quickly dissipated as it vanished into thin air. Standing in the monsters place was a teenager about the same age as me, he wore a black jumpsuit similar to those a drifter would wear and carried a long dark blade.
The teenager walked over to me and asked, “Are you all right?”
“I’m okay, thanks for saving us” I replied
“No need to thank me” he replied
Then my sister Hayley said “ It's you, it's nice to see you again”
"Wait, you know him?" I asked confusingly.
"She does know me yes, in a way" the teenager replied to my question.
"Well whatever, anyway who are you? I don't think I've ever seen you round here before" I commented.
“Oh, my apologies my name is Xonic, Xonic Cryoliz and I live in Twilight Town, same as you” Xonic explained. “So you have returned at last Absolution, it’s been a while” he said to my blade.
“It’s good to see you too, it has been too long” Absolution replied.
“Wait a minute, how do you know my blade’s name?” I asked
After hearing this Xonic appeared deep in thought and said in a soft voice, “So your memories even with your keyblade are still locked away”.
“Keyblade? What’s a Keyblade?” I asked.
Xonic turned towards me and explained, “A Keyblade is a sacred blade given only to those who have a pure heart in light, darkness or even of the twilight, which you have been chosen as”
I was stunned and then persistently asked, “Do you know what was it that I did before? I just yelled and those shadows disappeared”.
“Each keyblade has it’s own special effect or ability, in your case it seemed to bestow you with what seemed to be psychic abilities and that is an ability not common in keyblades” Xonic explained and then said in a low voice with a hint of disbelief “Hmm I guess his magic was stronger than I thought"
I sat there trying to figure out what was going on but I thought that it could wait for later and asked “Look Xonic would you be able to help us get back to Twilight Town? We’re exhausted from trying to get away from those… things”.
“Sure” Xonic replied, he lead us to the Train Station while my parents struggled to carry me to the station because I was still tired from before. When they reached the station Xonic turned around and said “Well here we are”, “Look Draco if you need to discuss this matter some more in private, come and see me at my house and I’ll tell you everything." Xonic began to say then lowered his voice and said "I hope you regain your memories soon”
I heard this and asked "Wait a minute what do you mean-" but was cut off by Xonic saying “Well, so long!” and vanished in front of our eyes. With that we boarded the train, and traveled home after a more than hectic day at the beach.
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