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well its almost done.. mind reading it when its finished?
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i'll def. read it. lol
actuall, there is 1 more surprise that you might have had a feeling that would happen coming up in the next chapter ^^
actuall, there is 1 more surprise that you might have had a feeling that would happen coming up in the next chapter ^^
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^ thanks a lot! and really? gettng excited!!
i just typed up a quick pre-chapter to Chapter 14. enjoy!
Interlude to Chapter 14
“Namine?”
A girl with blonde hair turned around. She wore a white dress and her eyes were ocean blue.
“Roxas!” she smiled.
“Sora and Kairi are finally together again,” Roxas said.
“Yes, I know. And now we’re together,” Namine said.
Roxas walked up to her and held both of her hands. “As long as Sora and Kairi are together, we’ll be together forever.”
Namine giggled. She looked around in the darkness only to see Roxas smiling at her. That’s all she ever wanted.
“Does Kairi know? That I’m her Nobody?”
“I’m sure Sora will tell her when the time is right,” Roxas said.
“How do you think she’ll take it?” Namine asked.
“Kairi is strong; she can handle anything. Sora knows that also,” Roxas smiled.
“Yeah, you’re right,” Namine said.
They walked around in the darkness holding hands.
“You know what this means, right?” Namine asked.
“Huh?”
“Sora and Kairi are doing the same as us: holding hands.”
“Oh, right,” Roxas said.
“Weird to think about; that you’re doing the same movements as your Nobody. Like your twin,” Namine said.
Roxas laughed a little. “I guess you can say they’re like our twins, although we do look a little different.”
“Not so much. More like our personalities are different. Sora’s more outgoing and you’re more quiet. Kairi’s much stronger than I am and stronger than I’ll ever be. Even though we all look the same; we are different inside,” Namine said.
Roxas thought for a moment. “Yeah, that makes more sense.”
Namine smiled. She stood up and looked down at Roxas. “Come on, we’re almost home.”
Interlude to Chapter 14
“Namine?”
A girl with blonde hair turned around. She wore a white dress and her eyes were ocean blue.
“Roxas!” she smiled.
“Sora and Kairi are finally together again,” Roxas said.
“Yes, I know. And now we’re together,” Namine said.
Roxas walked up to her and held both of her hands. “As long as Sora and Kairi are together, we’ll be together forever.”
Namine giggled. She looked around in the darkness only to see Roxas smiling at her. That’s all she ever wanted.
“Does Kairi know? That I’m her Nobody?”
“I’m sure Sora will tell her when the time is right,” Roxas said.
“How do you think she’ll take it?” Namine asked.
“Kairi is strong; she can handle anything. Sora knows that also,” Roxas smiled.
“Yeah, you’re right,” Namine said.
They walked around in the darkness holding hands.
“You know what this means, right?” Namine asked.
“Huh?”
“Sora and Kairi are doing the same as us: holding hands.”
“Oh, right,” Roxas said.
“Weird to think about; that you’re doing the same movements as your Nobody. Like your twin,” Namine said.
Roxas laughed a little. “I guess you can say they’re like our twins, although we do look a little different.”
“Not so much. More like our personalities are different. Sora’s more outgoing and you’re more quiet. Kairi’s much stronger than I am and stronger than I’ll ever be. Even though we all look the same; we are different inside,” Namine said.
Roxas thought for a moment. “Yeah, that makes more sense.”
Namine smiled. She stood up and looked down at Roxas. “Come on, we’re almost home.”
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^aaah!! soo awesome! first comment yes!!!
i just typed it up this morning and i didnt really know what else to write lol. i know it was short but the next 2 chapters will be longer.
i will lol thanks. i'm going to post the chapter up on Tuesday.
Yay great job i can't get enough i'm totally addicted LOL and def. take your time even though i can't wait till the next chap.
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tuesday... got it! ill read it!! XD
that was a great pre chapter although they should have kissed. that would have been sweet
^i was thinking about it, but the part where Namine says they're holding hands right now just as we are, if they kissed that meant Sora and Kairi would have kissed. i wanted to save that for an upcoming chapter....and another surprise 
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^ kissing scene?! waaahh!!! sweeeetnesss!!!
^maybe more than one .... O.O the suspense is killing! lol
OH MY GOD! WHERE HAVE I BEEN WHEN THIS WAS BEING WRITTED - I mean WRITTEN?!
I just read the entire thing Angels, and I haven't had my heart flutter like this (well maybe since I last read Acin's story) but my heart does not flutter easily at most stories. I yes I love to read, and when my heart flutters, that tells me, deep down, this story has something behind it, something that we can never see, but why need to see it when we can feel it?
I can't wait for the final chapter, and just glad that I got in before it totally ended! ^_^
I just read the entire thing Angels, and I haven't had my heart flutter like this (well maybe since I last read Acin's story) but my heart does not flutter easily at most stories. I yes I love to read, and when my heart flutters, that tells me, deep down, this story has something behind it, something that we can never see, but why need to see it when we can feel it?
I can't wait for the final chapter, and just glad that I got in before it totally ended! ^_^
lol thats okay Silent as long as you read it lol
i have 2 more chapters to write, and im posting chapter 14 on tuesday being that i wont even be able to sign on tomorrow. and theres one or two surprises left...and then a sequel!! lol
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whee!! surprizes!!! and sequel!! woot!!!
CAN'T WaiT!!! (ate pizza again... sorry XD)
CAN'T WaiT!!! (ate pizza again... sorry XD)
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