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chapter14

see ya man,anyway,for anyone else who will bother to read this,chapter14


Chapter14:Anti-evil force1

As they sat,wondering why,why they were there,why such a thing happenned to them and why did this have to happen.
Eventually,Chris stood up "I can't take this anymore,I'm going to find out why,were here"he stated.
"How?"Laura asked.
Chris pointed to the mirror and explained "that's a two-way mirror,they can see exactly what were donig,there probably examining us".
Chris picked up a chair and threw it at the window,smashing it.
To his shock,it was just a regular mirror,Chris fell to his knees "why is everything going wrong today?".
"Hey,hey it's alright,"Laura said as she walked over to Chris to comfort him.
"No,no it's not alright, look at what's happenned to us today,and tell me that's alright?"Chris shouted.
"Hey man,calm down"Rob said,soothingly"look,we've all been through alot,but there's only one way,we can get through the rest,and that's by sticking together,look,we've only known each other a day,but we've been through more in a day,than most people have in a lifetime,and we've survived and we'll survive anything else they through at us,ok?.
"Ok"Chris said meakly.
" 'Sides,not many people striken fear to an entire town in the space of two hours"Rob said as Chris laughed softly.
Erika and Laura stood side by side,admiring how the boys had bonded,and hopefully putten their misunderstandings behind them.
"Confusing,aren't they?"Erika said.
"Huh?"Laura replied.
"Boys,you never know what to expect"Erika explained.
"That's true"Laura agreed.
"Wait,did anyone check to see if the doors locked?"Erika said.
The group stood silent,Erika walked over to the door,turned the knob,and presto,it openned.
"My bad"Chris said,as he looked back at the mirror.
"S'alright"Rob said.
They walked out the doorway,to find an endless corridoor with an uncountable amount of doors.
"This..................could take a while"Laura pointed out.
"No kidding"Chris agreed.
Before the kids could start their journey,they heard familar voices approaching,they turned round to see two very familiar faces.
"Mac and Joe"Rob snarled.
"Oh,hey kids"Mac said nicely"what's up?"
"Here to gass us again?"Laura said almost sarcastically.
"We were only dong our jobs"Joe assured them.
"And that was?"Laura asked.
"To get you here,of course"Joe replied.
"And why do you want us here?"Laura want to know,"well,if you'd come with us W will explain all"Joe answered.
The kids agreed to follow Mac and Joe,down the long hallway,they stayed atleast two meters away from Mac and Joe at all times,to be ready if they tried anything.
They came to big wooden double door,and inside was a long conference table,with General Weinstein sitting at the top of it.
"Agent Macpharlene,agent Johnson,you may leave now"he ordered.
Mac and Joe left the room as instructed.
"Sit down kids,it's alright,no tricks here"General Weinstein assured them.
The kids sat at the table facing each other,Chris making sure,he faced Erika,as he sat in the chair across from her,he winked at her,to be met with Erika rolling her eyes up to heaven,Chris sighed to himself "I'll get her".
"Well,well kids,what a day you've had,we heard of your experience in Hickory Falls"Weinstein said as he giggled to himself.
"Cut to do chase,general,why are we here?"Rob asked.
"I see,we have an impatient one here,well here goes"Weinstein said, "as,Ive already explained,your parents had the same genetics you have,which meant they also had powers,but that's not all you don't know about them,do you remember the "Anti-evil force1"?"Weinstein asked.
The kids nodded.
"Yes the Anti-evil force1, the first batch of super heroes...........................have you guessed,who they were yet?"Weinstein asked "yes,your parents were the anti-evil force1,and we would like you,to become the second wave,thus becoming the anti-evil force2."Weinstein told them.
"B-but,we have no training"Erika admitted.
"And,that's why your here,if you decide to stay,we will train you to become,as good,maybe even better than your parents"Weinstein said.
"Can we have some time to think about it?"Erika asked.
"What's there to think about,I wanna be a superhero,where do I sign up?"Chris asked enthusiastcly.
Weinstein once again ignored Chris and told Erika "look you can stay here,tonight,and decide tomorrow,anyway it is getting late,you best go to sleep,Macpharlene and Johnson shall show you to your rooms".
Mac and Joe enterred the room,as if they knew when they were needed,"c'mon guys,this way"Joe said gently.
The kids once again stayed a couple of feet away from Mac and Joe,"why are we thinking about this,the only bad thing about this, is the name,but I'm sure we can change that"Chris said.
Rob spoke up"Look Chris,we'll all talk about it in the morning,and decide then"...........................


there ya go, hope ya liked it,see my chappys are getting longer,and hopefully i'm slowing down,if not tell me,thanx and bye
 
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well last night sonic i had to go to this church thing, the day where jesus was betrayed by judus so anyway........... *mind dies* (20 minutes later)....... oh yeah nice chapter........copy that good buddy.......
 

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Chapter15

Glad you liked it mate,anyway,I felt loike writin' another chappy,so,here she is,chapter 15


Chapter15:Twas the Night Before Decisions
"Chris your in there,Laura in there,Erika in there and lastly Rob,in there"Mac said,as he pointed the kids to each of their rooms,"sleep well,you could have a big day tomorrow".
Each one of them,openned their rooms doors,as Mac and Joe walked off,to find a huge room with ensuite bathroom,sofa's,etc.,it was like a hotel room,only with double the facilities.
They stood there in shock.
"Oh"Erika said.
"My"Chris continued.
"God"Laura finished.
"Well see ya in the morning"they all shouted as they ran into their rooms.
Chris jumped on his double bed,turned on the televison and said to himself "I wonder if I can get any porn on this thing?".
Chris began to press buttons on the remote profsely,but after searching through every channel twice,he did not find what he wanted.
"Oh well,not tonight,I guess"Chris sighed.
He lay on his bed,thinking of what had happenned today,remembering the fire incident,and why was it fire he realesed,not any other element.
He suddenly sat up and looked at the digital alarm clock across the room,"I've been up thinking for an hour now,I best get to sleep"he said to himself.
Chris turned over and began to fall asleep,just as he felt is eyes shutting,there was a knock on his door,"Uungh"Chris sighed as he shuffled towards to the door.
"Who is it?"he asked as he yawned,holding the door handle.
"It's Erika"the voice said.
Chris suddenly woke up "Erika,what do you want?"he asked.
"Em,could you like...........open the door,it'd be easier than talking through it"Erika requested.
"Oh yeah,sure"Chris said,as he openned the door to see Erika in a long black robe,Chris whistled.
"Shut up"Erika said as she sighed"your so immature".
"Well,to what do I owe this pleasure,got lonely in the middle of the night,need someone to keep you company,felt cold and needed someone to warm you up,that sorta thing?"Chris asked.
"Oh,please"Erika said under her breath.
"No,I want to talk to you about today,"she admitted.
"Yeah,I'm the right person to talk to,good choice"Chris said.
"Actually I tri................nevermind"Erika said,not admitting that she knocked on the other two doors but Rob and Laura were asleep,she didn't want to hurt his pride,which she was sure she had done alot of today.
"So what's up?"Chris said,as he sat on one of the two sofa's,Erika sat beside him and said "Well,do you not think,this is a bit weird,how do we know they're telling the truth?"
"We don't"Chris admitted."but we have to trust them for now,and so far all this makes sense,a little bit anyway".
"But why?why didn't our parents tell us anything?"Erika wondered.
"As Weinstein said, they thought we'd tell someone,and I'd be the first to admit,I'd tell anyone I could"Chris assured Erika.
Erika was seeing Chris in a wole different light,but she didn't know whether it was a front,but for now,she didn't care.
"But if it is true,just think,our parents,were the first superpowered,superheroes,ever"Chris exclaimed.
"Speaking of that?what do you think about their offer?"Erika asked.
"I'm taking them up on it,whether any of you do or not"Chris told her.
"Why?"Erika asked stunned that Chris didn't even think about his decison.
"Look at it this way,you got pissed off with me,right?"Chris pointed out.
"Yeah"Erika answered,still perplexed.
"You blew doors clear off a van,yes?"Chris said.
"Em,yeah"Laura said as she twiddled her fingers.
"Well,do you want that happenning,all your life,whenever you get angry,of course not,so atleast if you stay here,you can learn to control it,plus, don't worry if all of us do stay,we'll change the name of the group"Chris said as Erika giggled and nodded in agreement.
Erika got up and walked to the door,Chris followed,she openned the door and walked out,she turned around to Chris,"Chris?"she said.
"Yeah?"Chhris said.
Erika leaned over to Chirs,kissed him on the cheek and said "thanks".
As Erika walked into her room,Chris stood there shocked,saying nothing he closed his door,walked over to the bed,grabbed a pillow,put it over his head,and shouted for joy,until he finally fell asleep.
Meanwhile Erika lay in her room,on her bed,thinking "Is Chris a different person,by day,than at night?",until she fell asleep herself.
At exactly seven AM the next morning,all four kids alarms went off, and each one thought to themselves "it's decision time"......................................


Hope ya liked this chappy, a little soppy,but it was needed =P
 

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chapter16

Thanx,oh and WM,can't wait to read your ;) well I felt that chapter was so soppy,I needed a normal one to try and balance the scales,so *ahem* here goes


Chapter16:The Decision​
The gang slowly walked out of their rooms,facing each other,Laura and Rob,looked slightly nerovus,but Erika and Chris were as cool as you like,Rob and Laura couldn't understand how they were so calm,as they were unaware of the conversation,they had the night before.
Agent Macpharlene and agent Johnson,were waiting for the kids down the end of the hall.
"Sleep well?"Mac asked.
"I don't get it,why are you being so nice to us?"Rob asked.
"Because we need you guys,and we'll do whatever it takes to get you to stay"Mac replied.
"Oh"Rob said suprised by the reply.
Mac and Joe brought them to what looked like a big cafeteria,"this is where we tell you are decision?"Laura asked.
"No,this is where you eat"Joe informed her.
"Oh,"Laura said as she sat on a bench next to Erika,she leant over and whispered in her ear"how are you so calm about this?"
Erika's eyes widened,she wasn't going to mention the conversation she had with Chris,she found it two embarrasing, so, she whispered back "are you kidding I'm real nervous,I'm just trying not to show it".
"Oh"Laura said,still not convinced.
Erika looked up at Chris,then over to Rob, eating profusly and sloppily,"poor Chris,thinks after last night I like him,but I so don't,don't I?"she thought to herself.
Then she looked over at Rob and thought to herself"I doubt I like Rob either,at first maybe,but he's too controlling..........................................................................god I'm picky."
"Hello?,hello?"Laura said clicking her fingers,finally taking Erika out of her trance.
"Oh,oh sorry"Erika said.
What's wrong?"Laura asked.
"Oh em,I'm just thinking about my decision,that's all"Erika lied.
After breakfast they went to the conference room,where they first met Weinstein,the night before.
Weinstein was standing,facing away from the entrance door,"kids,kids,sit down"he said not even looking back once.
The all did as told,but this time Mac and Joe stayed in the room.
"Ok,kids did you have enough time to decide?"Weinstein asked,as he turned around to face the kids.
They all answered "yes" simultaneously.
"Good,good"Weinstein said " and what's your decision,remember you can leave at any time."
"Erika what's your choice?"he asked.
Erika looked round the table,she stopped at Chris,who smiled at her politely,she stood up and said"I have decided to stay".
"Brilliant news,Erika you may leave the room if you wish"Weinstein said as he smiled at her.
"I'll stay, thanks" she answered
"Em,how about you Rob?"the General asked.
"I've decided to stay,for now"Rob replied.
"Excellent"Weinstein said"you may also leave if desired"but Rob stayed.
"And you Chris,stay or go?"Weinstein requested.
"Go,I don't think this is for me"Chris admitted.
The room stood silent,until Erika spoke"but why?Chris why?"
"Nah,I'm just yankin' ya,I'll stay"Chris said.
"Very funny Mr.Murphy"Weinstein said impatiently,"and lastly and certainly not least Laura."Weinstein said as he got his smile back.
"Hmmm,I guess I'll have to stay too"Laura said defeatedly.
"Wonderful,a full turn out,just what we wanted"Weinstein said as he walked over to the door.
"Come on kids,come with me,no time to waste,time to meet your teammate"Weinstein ordered.
"Teammate?"Rob said.
"Oh my yes"Weinstein replied.
"Why was he or she not kidnapped with us?"Rob asked.
"Oh,he's not from Marshall City"Weinstein admitted.
"Well,then,where is he from?"Chris interupted.
"oh you'll see soon enough"the General said as they walked down the long coridoor,"you'll see soon enough".................................................


Hope ya'll liked this one too,there probably wont be one tomorrow or Sunday,but,I''ll try,see ya soon
 

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yeah i'm with Winged Mirage about this chapter being better keep it up mate!
 

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Ok,well it's 6AM,coz of daylight savings,my alarm woke me too early,I can't get back to sleep,so I'll write a chapter


Chapter18:G'Tarr

The group aproached a bedroom,at least three corridoors,down from theirs,they entered it,it looked no different from theirs,except one thing was different,there was someone in this room,the person was asleep,with its blanket completely covering its head,"Hey,wake up,you have visitors"Joe shouted.
"What?"the person under the blanket murmerred softly.
"I said there are people here to see you"Joe stated.
"People, as in real people, or more of you guys?"the person said,still under the blanket.
"Real people"Weinstein said with a caring smile on his face.
"Close your eyes first, I've got to get dressed,I don't want them to see me naked"the person responded.
"Don't worry we'll leave the room,call us when your ready"Weinstein said as he ushered the gang out of the room.
While they were outside Rob and Erika begn to talk about this other person.
"Do you think he has powers too?"Rob asked.
"Or maybe he's an experiment"Erika pointed out.
"Duh,he's obviously and alien"Chris said.
"Shut up Chris"Rob said,"no I think,he's one ofe us,only he was brought here first".
"Yeah,I'd say your right"Erika agreed.
The dorr swung open,to reveal a little green boy,with an afro,black eyes,a cannon for a left hand,a right hand with three webbed fingers,and wearing nothing but a pair of black boots.
"Told you"Chris said as he smirked at Rob.
"I thought you said you were getting dressed"Laura splurtted out.
"I am" the Alien said,as he pointed at the boots.
Laura peeked at the Aliens crotch area to see there was nothing there"oh" she said perplexed.
"Everone this is Jee-tar"Weinstein said.
"Jee-tar?"Rob said.
"Yes Jee-tar,G-T-A-R-R,jee-tarr"Weinstein answered.
"Oh,ok"Rob replied,also perplexed.
The gang stood there amazed at what they saw,Erika was a little scared,Laura was confused,by his lack of...................why he wore only boots,Rob was worrying about the spelling,and Chirs was brimming with exitement.
Chris finally spoke up"Oh my god,you have an afro,and cool boots,holy shit,you have a cannon on your arm,you are the COOLEST!"Chris shouted as he jumped around G'Tarr.
"Em.......thanks"G'Tarr said confused,"why does he jump all over me?"
"He's an idiot"Rob replied,which was met by an evil glare by Chris,as Rob smirked.
"Well G'Tarr this is Laura,Rob,Erika and Chris"Mac said as he pointed the kids out accordingly.
"Please to meet you all"G'Tarr said as he stretched out his three-fingered webbed hand for them to shake,none would,Rob,Erika and Laura were too scared,Chris was too busy feeling G'Tarrs afro.
"Well come one kids,now that the whole teams assembled,we better start,training,ok?"Weinstein asked.
They all nodded in agreement.
"Good,good,then follow me to the testing labs,we gotta find what makes you tick"Weinstein said,as the gang followed a little scared and nervous.
Mac and Joe went the other way,"poor kids,there in for a few weeks in hell"Mac said.
"Yeah,"Joe replied as he laughed,and continued up the corridoor..................


Yes this chappy was shorter than most,but I felt,what needed to be said was said,hope ya liked it,more soon ^^
 
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another of my famous legal bumps,more later,to make up for no chapters yesterday
 

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okeys folks,I think I'll just write more,for the heck of it XD


Chapter17:Will You Lead the Force?
"Ok kid,your going to split up,and go with seperate agents,for the start of your training,MEN!"Weinstein said as five agents entered the coridoor,from the testing lab,each agent stood behind one kid,"take them away".
"Chris come with me" a tall blonde woman in a black suit with dark shades said.
"Oh indeed I shall"Chris said with an arrogant smirk on his face.
The woman walked off,towards the testing lab,with Chris following,in awe of her beauty.
"Robert,your with me"Weinstein told him"you stay here 'till the others are gone."
Rob nodded in acknowledgement.
"Erika your with Mac,as soon as he comes back from his lunch break,and G'Tarr your with Joe,when he gets back, but in the mean time,these two agents shall escort you to where you shall be tested today."Weinstein added,as Erika and G'Tarr listened.
"And Laura,last again,are we my dear,well we can't have that,you can go now with agent..............."Weinstein stuttered.
"Bates,sir"a small,muscular bald man,in shades and dark suite replied.
"Ah,yes,Agent Bates."Weinsein remembered.
All except General Weinstein and Rob stayed,"now Robert,the reason I am taking you is,you are the only one to share the power of your elder"Weinstein stated.
"You mean my dad was..................."Rob said.
"Yes,your father was the Whizz"Weinstein replied.
"What a crappy name"Rob snorted.
"Oh yes,and what would you be called then,hmm?"The General asked.
"Speed Demon"Rob answered as the smile on his face widened.
"Then there it is,that is your codename:Speed Demon"Weinstein informed him.
"Sweet,but,em shouldn't we be getting training?"Rob asked.
"Oh none of you are training yet,we still have to to tap into your source of power"Weinstein answered.
"Oh"Rob said dissapointedly.
"Em......General,why did you really want to ake me?"Rob asked.
"Ah,yes,you'd be right in saying,me using your father as an excuse was a lie,no,the real reason,I want to train you now,is,I want you to lead Anti-evil Force2,I see alot of potential in you"Weinstein said proudly.
"But the Whizz wasn't the leader"Rob argued.
"He was different,he wasn't as intelligent as you are,but your mother was,so don't just think you got it all from your father"Weinstein pointed out.
"Em,yes sir,I guess"Rob said.
"I accept,but on one condition"Rob stated.
"Yes?"Weinstein said intrigued.
"We get to change the name of the team"Rob said while laughing.
"Oh,ok,I suppose"Weinstein said unsurely.
"Do you not trust us?"Rob asked.
"No it's just I thought up the name,I thought it was pretty cool."Weinstein moaned.
"And it was General,thirty years ago,but now it's time to move on"Rob said optimisticly.
"Yes,your right,and speaking of moving on,we best get to work,follow me"Weinstein ordered,as he stepped into an elevator.
"Where are we going?"Rob asked nervously.
"To the football field out the back,I mean if you have super speed,you'll need a wide area to stretch you legs"Weinstein said as he smiled.
"Hmm,yeah your right"Rob said as he calmed down.
And as the elevator descended down the shafts,Rob left for the hardest training session of his life.
Meanwhile Erika and G'Tarr were sitting,in a testing lab,by themselves,too scared to talk to one another.
By mistake Erika asked"so what's it like having three fingers"quickly after asking she covered her mouth with embarrasment.
"Hmm,it's ok,but what's really a kick in toes,is having three WEBBED fingers"G'Tarr answered,as if the question meant nothing.
"Does it not bother you,that people keep asking you about your fingers?"Erika asked.
"Nah,it gets me attention."G'Tarr admitted.
"Your nothing like I expected"Erika pointed out.
"It's the afro isn't it"G'Tarr said shamefully.
"No,no,it's just I didn't expect you to be so,well normal,asside from looks of course"Erika said.
"Of course"G'Tarr laughed.
"Well my planet was very much like earth,except people were green and had no genitalia,or those things"G'Tarr said as he pointed at Erika's chest.
Erika blushed,"what are they?"G'Tarr asked.
Erika didn't know what to reply,so she changed the subject,"A cannon for an arm,that must be cool."
"Makes me kickass at basketball"G'Tarr said as they both giggled,waiting for Mac and Joe,to come and test them,to see how they could unleash their hidden "gifts"........................


Hope ya folks liked that one,I didn't,but if you did,that's allthat matters,enjoy ;)
 

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Legal bump,legal ump,legal bump,legal bump


New chapter SOON,if anyone decides to read the last two :(
 

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No Fanfics are good without aliens j/k,I think these two chapters were weak, I hope I'm on the ball for the next one,which will prolly be my next post.^^
 
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