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Ok i think i might have is it too muvh to give the first letter?
...Forget it. It's the chapel in KH1's hollow bastion (where Maleficent met with her companions).
CHAPEL-LIKE????
I thought everyone would pick it up... I mean, it wasn't meant to be a mystery, but I expected that a little thought would be required.
CHAPEL-LIKE????
I thought everyone would pick it up... I mean, it wasn't meant to be a mystery, but I expected that a little thought would be required.
Gah! I should've known that!
I really haven't played KH1 in a while:toungesmile:
I really haven't played KH1 in a while:toungesmile:
....People?????
Come on... one review?
PWETTY-PLEAZE?
(YOU WILL NEVER CATCH ME BEGGING IN SUCH A PATHETIC FASHION EVER AGAIN <PERIOD>) lol
Well, if you don't want chapter 5....
(hehehehe.... nah, I'm playing).
But seriously, it's already done.
EDIT- btw, what do you think about the chapter? Was it well written? Was it horrible?
Comment please! (I know, beggars can't be choosers!)
Come on... one review?
PWETTY-PLEAZE?
(YOU WILL NEVER CATCH ME BEGGING IN SUCH A PATHETIC FASHION EVER AGAIN <PERIOD>) lol
Well, if you don't want chapter 5....
(hehehehe.... nah, I'm playing).
But seriously, it's already done.
EDIT- btw, what do you think about the chapter? Was it well written? Was it horrible?
Comment please! (I know, beggars can't be choosers!)
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Ok, I'll give this chapter a proper review xD
Ahem, yes, it's very well written with nice grammar and an interesting plot. You set up the scene well.
Although, I have to say, it was quite obvious that the meeting takes place in the chapel in Hollow Bastion! I mean come on, give us a challenge!
You know I'm kidding about the last part. I just couldn't resist! But I'm serious about the first part xD
Ahem, yes, it's very well written with nice grammar and an interesting plot. You set up the scene well.
Although, I have to say, it was quite obvious that the meeting takes place in the chapel in Hollow Bastion! I mean come on, give us a challenge!
You know I'm kidding about the last part. I just couldn't resist! But I'm serious about the first part xD
...OMG- I was flipping out before I read the end!!!!!
Next time, I will REALLY give you a challenge (not necessarily next chapter XD)
So.... where's everyone else? I was just getting used to their company!
Thanks 'princess of heart! (is there anything else I could call you- besides "princess" cause that seems almost pedophilish...) lol
Answer in PM, cause I have like this OCD thing to try to keep threads clean....
but occasional spam is alright between chapters!
Well, I'll be waiting for reviews.
FINAL NOTE---
EXPECT CHAPTER 5 BY NEXT WEEKEND. IT IS 99% COMPLETE AT THIS POINT, I AM WORKING ON THE FINISHING TOUCHES NOW. (WHY AM I TYPING IN CAPS LOCK????)
Next time, I will REALLY give you a challenge (not necessarily next chapter XD)
So.... where's everyone else? I was just getting used to their company!
Thanks 'princess of heart! (is there anything else I could call you- besides "princess" cause that seems almost pedophilish...) lol
Answer in PM, cause I have like this OCD thing to try to keep threads clean....
but occasional spam is alright between chapters!
Well, I'll be waiting for reviews.
FINAL NOTE---
EXPECT CHAPTER 5 BY NEXT WEEKEND. IT IS 99% COMPLETE AT THIS POINT, I AM WORKING ON THE FINISHING TOUCHES NOW. (WHY AM I TYPING IN CAPS LOCK????)
omg lol
im eagerly waiting to get an xbox 360 and gOw lol.
I also desperately want this next chapter. Supply pl0x? :O
im eagerly waiting to get an xbox 360 and gOw lol.
I also desperately want this next chapter. Supply pl0x? :O
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*Reads what has happened* xD!
I'm sorry, but I gotta laugh at heart's review, I thought you were serious for a moment about the location and your opinion about it! xD *Chuckles*
Nice update as usual! ^-^
Sadly, my review will be choppy, why, I do not know, but the review seems not to like me... o.o
Anyway, you did a very well job, especially with the descriptions of Organization XIII, if I am correct, I could count a few of them of who they were, though, one I figured out right away if it is the members. xD
Very good, and YAY FOR SIDE PLOTS! xD
It's nice seeing the characters interact while it seems like all of them are prepared to stab each other in the back... Err... Don't ask... >.>
I can't really think of anything else to say curerntly, maybe because I'm making myself sleep deprived by waking up so early, but whatever. ^-^
... YOU. GOT. TO. BE. KIDDING. ME!!!!!
That's unfair! D:
Tis not fair you had to give your pictures to those kids! Who put you up to it?! Sorry, my rage is short seeing I'd go on ranting about it seeing you being sleep deprived was put in vain! D:
Just... Gah... ><
I'm sorry, but I gotta laugh at heart's review, I thought you were serious for a moment about the location and your opinion about it! xD *Chuckles*
Nice update as usual! ^-^
Sadly, my review will be choppy, why, I do not know, but the review seems not to like me... o.o
Anyway, you did a very well job, especially with the descriptions of Organization XIII, if I am correct, I could count a few of them of who they were, though, one I figured out right away if it is the members. xD
Very good, and YAY FOR SIDE PLOTS! xD
It's nice seeing the characters interact while it seems like all of them are prepared to stab each other in the back... Err... Don't ask... >.>
I can't really think of anything else to say curerntly, maybe because I'm making myself sleep deprived by waking up so early, but whatever. ^-^
... YOU. GOT. TO. BE. KIDDING. ME!!!!!
That's unfair! D:
Tis not fair you had to give your pictures to those kids! Who put you up to it?! Sorry, my rage is short seeing I'd go on ranting about it seeing you being sleep deprived was put in vain! D:
Just... Gah... ><
Err... the girl's gonna miss graduation cause she's gotta be home schooled... I think the least I could do was give her a drawing Tao XD
So Tao- who do you think they were: give me names (you should know. I've some of those descriptions before).
I think it's pretty easy to tell who they were. (but yea- I won't even try to be subtle- it's the Organization. I am not saying anything else).
Last note- Tao, why haven't you answered my pm!?!!?!?!?!? (answer in your explanatory pm)
So Tao- who do you think they were: give me names (you should know. I've some of those descriptions before).
I think it's pretty easy to tell who they were. (but yea- I won't even try to be subtle- it's the Organization. I am not saying anything else).
Last note- Tao, why haven't you answered my pm!?!!?!?!?!? (answer in your explanatory pm)
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>.< I suppose... >.>
Though, wouldn't she be going back to school when her injuries are healed?! >.<
And as for names- I know for sure that Vexen was one of them xD (Scary... It's close to Vixen...)
As for the others, I quickly need to make a check of their names, seeing I have a visual of 'em, just gotta find their names.
It seems you've stuck with the trio from Kingdom Heart Chain of Memories. ^-^
I'll probably tell ya who I think they are in pm when I re-read the descriptions and look at the profiles for the characters. ><
'Twas tired this morning. ><
Though, wouldn't she be going back to school when her injuries are healed?! >.<
And as for names- I know for sure that Vexen was one of them xD (Scary... It's close to Vixen...
)As for the others, I quickly need to make a check of their names, seeing I have a visual of 'em, just gotta find their names.
It seems you've stuck with the trio from Kingdom Heart Chain of Memories. ^-^
I'll probably tell ya who I think they are in pm when I re-read the descriptions and look at the profiles for the characters. ><
'Twas tired this morning. ><
Well, I'm not gonna say if that's right or not....
Because what they said was very important.
I'll give you one last hint- the last person was in the rafters of the chapel. Remember- rafters support the roof, which is high up. (Think on it)
Because what they said was very important.
I'll give you one last hint- the last person was in the rafters of the chapel. Remember- rafters support the roof, which is high up. (Think on it)
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xD If I am correct, I believe I know who he is. ^-^
Though, I could always be wrong. >D
Nrmph! >D
... If I start spamming, shoot me, okay Anonymous? -.-'''
Though, I could always be wrong. >D
Nrmph! >D
... If I start spamming, shoot me, okay Anonymous? -.-'''
Update- Yea... umm... I am having minor computer problems and may not be able to get the next chapter up before Monday... :\
Sorry, I'll try to get things sorted out...
I'll REALLY try to get it up... but, don't get your hopes up.
Just felt like I should keep you guys informed.
EDIT- And, if you look at the first page of this thread, you'll notice I made the title of the fic look all nice and eye-catching!!! (it's also in my link.... I just remembered!! lol)
Sorry, I'll try to get things sorted out...
I'll REALLY try to get it up... but, don't get your hopes up.
Just felt like I should keep you guys informed.
EDIT- And, if you look at the first page of this thread, you'll notice I made the title of the fic look all nice and eye-catching!!! (it's also in my link.... I just remembered!! lol)
GAH! Computer problems!!
Lol it's ok. It's not your fault, it's your computer's fault! xD
Lol it's ok. It's not your fault, it's your computer's fault! xD
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Mkay! ^-^
I just hope these problems with your computer doesn't grow worse or permament, seeing that would be a bigger worry really.
Thanks for telling us! ^-^
As usuall, tie shall wait for an update! >D
Ooooh, nice! =D
That's always fun to do. xD
Good job! ^0^
I just hope these problems with your computer doesn't grow worse or permament, seeing that would be a bigger worry really.
Thanks for telling us! ^-^
As usuall, tie shall wait for an update! >D
Ooooh, nice! =D
That's always fun to do. xD
Good job! ^0^
Okay, good news and bad news and then semi-good news-
The good news is that my computer isn't acting up any more! (I have no idea what it was....)
THe bad news is that I got into the word file I have for this fic, and I re-read chapter 5...
And I thought it was terrible. I seriously hated it!
Like, it was so bad I didn't even want to post it.
So I'm re-writing it, and should have it done by tommorow if I have the time.
The semi-good news is that I'm sick today and have all day to write! xD
So, expect an update by tomorrow!
The good news is that my computer isn't acting up any more! (I have no idea what it was....
)THe bad news is that I got into the word file I have for this fic, and I re-read chapter 5...
And I thought it was terrible. I seriously hated it!
Like, it was so bad I didn't even want to post it.
So I'm re-writing it, and should have it done by tommorow if I have the time.
The semi-good news is that I'm sick today and have all day to write! xD
So, expect an update by tomorrow!
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Awww...sucks that you're sick! xD
But YAY!! New chappie soon!:toungesmile:
But YAY!! New chappie soon!:toungesmile:
Chapter 5: The Lost Two
Sora was absolutely lost. His body had been taken from him, and the darkness had clouded his mind. All he could see, hear, feel, and smell was the dark. It leaked into his senses, blinding and immobilizing him. His body hung aimlessly in the abyss, as did one other. He felt whispers grace his mind… they felt familiar, friendly- but nothing in the dark was welcoming Sora reminded himself.
And yet, he knew it wouldn’t overtake him. No matter what, he would always see the light. The light within the dark- Kairi would always help him. But where was she? There was no light in this dark. It was impenetrable in every way, overwhelming his feeble human form, easily engulfing him.
He didn’t bother resisting it. The raw, untamed power of the dark was slowly working him over. He was being tricked by the dark, and he didn’t care.
Sora gave in to the dark, allowing it to engulf him immediately and entirely. It was there Sora rested, trapped in the dark.
Kairi wasn’t giving in as easily. Everything about the darkness was revolting to her. Its taste, its smell, its touch- her unconscious form shuddered at the prospect. Her body was suspended next to Sora, but her eyes were closed, and it appeared she wasn’t even breathing.
Kairi would resist the darkness in any way- she was a princess of the light, and she would never allow the dark to absorb her. She wasn’t afraid of the abyss, it couldn’t harm her. However, she was worried for Sora. Kairi knew he was nearby, and was very much aware that the dark was enveloping him, but what could she do?
She knew she couldn’t stay in this state forever, but she decided to herself that she would resist the darkness for as long as she could.
Elsewhere, in another world besieged by the dark, a different pair was having some troubles, but these two were far more active than Kairi and Sora. The two were garbed in ominous black jackets, and were walking beside each other in a fairly wide alley way. At the end of the street was a foggy green portal of darkness that was backed by a brick wall. The street moved onwards around a corner, leading up to an even wider path in the dark city. The starless sky above the city beheld a large, glossy silver moon hanging hypnotically above a towering white castle.
As they rounded the corner, the two anonymous figures stopped in the path of the moon. Of the figures, one had a feminine posture, complete with curved hips and an evident chest. Her face was hidden by the jacket’s hood, and she was staring at the luminescent orb with a fairly sad expression.
The other figure was just as transfixed by the sight. This enigma was hooded as well, but was taller and surprisingly had an equally thin waist, despite that the muscular tone of their chest was clearly masculine. “He must be taking it real hard,” laughed the unknown. His voice was cool, and had an edge to it that was welcoming and threatening at the same time.
His female counterpart looked at him despondently, “He’s not the only one… Are you forgetting that that,” with this she pointed towards the moon, “Was our only hope? We can’t possibly do all that again…” Her voice was unusually high-pitched, and even though she was depressed, their was a cruel, sarcastic spin on her tone.
The male took a serious tone, “Don’t kid yourself- you can’t feel despair. Besides, I never even thought you had a sensitive side.” The female scowled at him and remarked scornfully, “Vanishing can have that affect on a person.”
After a long glance at the white castle towering above the city, the man turned to his partner, “We should be good here… There’s no way they’ll come looking for us, and Maleficent doesn’t have a clue anything’s happened.”
The woman laughed, “Speak for yourself. I’m just stopping by- you didn’t think I’d baby-sit you forever, did you? No, I’ve got plans. Besides, I haven’t really forgiven you- if there’s a next time we meet, I’m getting my revenge.”
With that final note, the woman turned and strode back through the dark portal, leaving the worried man to himself. Without a moment to spare, the man walked further down the alley, deeper into the bowels of the world he had once called his home.
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Well, it's not as long as I'd like it to be, but I think it's good...
Again, try to guess who the unknowns are (the man might be hard, but the woman- please)
I'd like reviews!
Sora was absolutely lost. His body had been taken from him, and the darkness had clouded his mind. All he could see, hear, feel, and smell was the dark. It leaked into his senses, blinding and immobilizing him. His body hung aimlessly in the abyss, as did one other. He felt whispers grace his mind… they felt familiar, friendly- but nothing in the dark was welcoming Sora reminded himself.
And yet, he knew it wouldn’t overtake him. No matter what, he would always see the light. The light within the dark- Kairi would always help him. But where was she? There was no light in this dark. It was impenetrable in every way, overwhelming his feeble human form, easily engulfing him.
He didn’t bother resisting it. The raw, untamed power of the dark was slowly working him over. He was being tricked by the dark, and he didn’t care.
Sora gave in to the dark, allowing it to engulf him immediately and entirely. It was there Sora rested, trapped in the dark.
:|:|:|:|:|:|:
Kairi wasn’t giving in as easily. Everything about the darkness was revolting to her. Its taste, its smell, its touch- her unconscious form shuddered at the prospect. Her body was suspended next to Sora, but her eyes were closed, and it appeared she wasn’t even breathing.
Kairi would resist the darkness in any way- she was a princess of the light, and she would never allow the dark to absorb her. She wasn’t afraid of the abyss, it couldn’t harm her. However, she was worried for Sora. Kairi knew he was nearby, and was very much aware that the dark was enveloping him, but what could she do?
She knew she couldn’t stay in this state forever, but she decided to herself that she would resist the darkness for as long as she could.
:|:|:|:|:|:|:
Elsewhere, in another world besieged by the dark, a different pair was having some troubles, but these two were far more active than Kairi and Sora. The two were garbed in ominous black jackets, and were walking beside each other in a fairly wide alley way. At the end of the street was a foggy green portal of darkness that was backed by a brick wall. The street moved onwards around a corner, leading up to an even wider path in the dark city. The starless sky above the city beheld a large, glossy silver moon hanging hypnotically above a towering white castle.
As they rounded the corner, the two anonymous figures stopped in the path of the moon. Of the figures, one had a feminine posture, complete with curved hips and an evident chest. Her face was hidden by the jacket’s hood, and she was staring at the luminescent orb with a fairly sad expression.
The other figure was just as transfixed by the sight. This enigma was hooded as well, but was taller and surprisingly had an equally thin waist, despite that the muscular tone of their chest was clearly masculine. “He must be taking it real hard,” laughed the unknown. His voice was cool, and had an edge to it that was welcoming and threatening at the same time.
His female counterpart looked at him despondently, “He’s not the only one… Are you forgetting that that,” with this she pointed towards the moon, “Was our only hope? We can’t possibly do all that again…” Her voice was unusually high-pitched, and even though she was depressed, their was a cruel, sarcastic spin on her tone.
The male took a serious tone, “Don’t kid yourself- you can’t feel despair. Besides, I never even thought you had a sensitive side.” The female scowled at him and remarked scornfully, “Vanishing can have that affect on a person.”
After a long glance at the white castle towering above the city, the man turned to his partner, “We should be good here… There’s no way they’ll come looking for us, and Maleficent doesn’t have a clue anything’s happened.”
The woman laughed, “Speak for yourself. I’m just stopping by- you didn’t think I’d baby-sit you forever, did you? No, I’ve got plans. Besides, I haven’t really forgiven you- if there’s a next time we meet, I’m getting my revenge.”
With that final note, the woman turned and strode back through the dark portal, leaving the worried man to himself. Without a moment to spare, the man walked further down the alley, deeper into the bowels of the world he had once called his home.
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Well, it's not as long as I'd like it to be, but I think it's good...
Again, try to guess who the unknowns are (the man might be hard, but the woman- please
)I'd like reviews!
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Well, I'm guessing that they're from Organisation 13, right?
If so, then the woman is obviously Larxene...and the man could be Axel cause he has a muscular chest and a thin waist...dunno if that's right but that's what I think.:toungesmile: And I know they're definately Nobodies.
Anyways, I liked the chapter. Ha I'm not lost this time!! Lol yeah sorry I'm just proud at the fact that I'm not only totally confused, that I think I know exactly who they are xD.
And I like your description in this chapter.
If so, then the woman is obviously Larxene...and the man could be Axel cause he has a muscular chest and a thin waist...dunno if that's right but that's what I think.:toungesmile: And I know they're definately Nobodies.
Anyways, I liked the chapter. Ha I'm not lost this time!! Lol yeah sorry I'm just proud at the fact that I'm not only totally confused, that I think I know exactly who they are xD.
And I like your description in this chapter.
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