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doreo503

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Ok I wrote a fan fic but its sorta in poems, so each poem leads into eachother and it tells out the story. I'm not gonna say who its about cuz Ima let people guess, so don't be 2 criticizing say some of it doesn't go with the story cuz i allready know that, i had to add some more stuff to make it more deep into the story.

“A Chance”

By Dorian Benson


A chance to see other Worlds.
A choice to make just to thrive.
Yet one must look Darkness in its very eyes.
Eventually to be Consumed by it lies.


But Death is not an option.
No not just yet--
A life hangs in the balance.
Sinking into darkness Over and Over again.


A Mind becomes clouded—
A Heart becomes dark.
A memory starts to Fade.
Soon Forgetting all ever meant, ever said.


As a Soul fights to survive,
A soul doesn’t remember a Chance.
A chance to Survive--
A Choice long ago once made.


A Choice you would make again and again.
Just to be Heard.
A chance to Realize--
Made over Again and over Again.








“Alone”


A Soul walks along a Deserted beach.
Dreading the Angels who have forsaken me.
For what should I be Cursed to Survive—
When all I seek is to truly Die?


A Choice made so long ago.
Given the Power of newfound Hope.
Why should I have chose to Thrive—
When all I seek is to truly Die?


Ablate this suffering out of me.
So that I can truly see—
So that I can meet all who have gone.
For the day when I truly die…





















“A New Beginning”


For the day when I truly Die…
Awoken as if were a dream.
Questioning, haven’t the angels Forsaken me?
I must be mistaken, it seems all to Real.


Awoken as if it were a dream.
Yet as he Rises—
All he sees is Three.
Three, the number of Paths he sees.


One must be Taken—
Yet another Choice he must make.
Of one of the three Paths--
Darkness, Light, and Twilight.


Once consumed by Darkness—
He never wanted to go Back.
Once stalked by the Light—
And Death was his only refuge.


Yet Twilight, a path not yet taken.

Darkness and Light, he never wanted to see.
Yet Twilight to him—
Was right in Between.


With just one Step—
His Destiny changed.
No longer to make that same choice Again and Again.
As he stepped forth, a New Beginning had been made.
 

doreo503

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lol thanx, I origionally wrote them for some fan fic story i was making but when i stopped writing, i said i might as well put them here. So if their good, do u think i should keep posting more?
 

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Those are awesome, they sound so much better than mine! Mine are just soooo...corny. it's a shame...I guess, but yeah, yours are so dark and meaningful. Good, good, good! GREAT!
 

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i like em!! these poems are very touching, and have both deep and meaningful words of wisdom, good job! u go man!!
 

Angel X

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here's a poem i wrote


Destiny
children laughing. birds singing,
and the sound of seawater washing ashore.

i lay there on the beach
under the sun,
as it shone upon my face.

i raised by hands to cover such light,
but still, it was forever bright.

i stood up and walked towards the ocean,
that sparkled like pearls and diamonds.

my toes touched the cool water,
and with a flip, i jumped in.

my life suddenly felt so great,
i had freedom, it was peacful.

but maybe after we set sail,
this all could turn around.

though i dont want to let this go,
i still must walk on.

with such mighty weapon i bare,
i shall never give up.

in search of my destiny,
in search of who i was born to be.
 

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wow nice poems both of you here's one of mine....
With black feathered wings

With black-feathered wings she flies.
Though everyone else is in white.
You can hear her cries.
Echo throughout the night.

Why am I so different?
Why do you all stare at me?
I can still fly.
Who cares if I’m not in white?

Why does everyone whisper as I pass?
What’s wrong with me?
Why do you all keep staring?
I’m still a person.

Was it something I said?
Why do you keep staring at my wings?
Please stop talking about me.
I’m still just a girl.

I still have dreams.
So what if I fly with black wings?
I still wanna fly.
Please don’t make me cry.

I love what I am.
But why do I only fly.
During the night?
I think I know the answer.

I fly at night.
So I can hide my wings.
As far away from your sight
But yet they still show

At least I can fly
I don’t wanna change myself
But during the day
I gotta hide the real me

No one else knows my pain
No one else cares
But me…

You don’t know how much
I wanna have someone to fly with
Who’ll fly by my side?
Who doesn’t care about my color?

I want someone
Who’ll love me for me?
Who wont care that I’m
Different…

With black feathered
Wings I fly
All alone in the night
While everyone else is in
White.
 

Angel X

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i have one here


Riku to Sora

why are they laughing? why arent they afraid that someday we will never be okay?
why do you talk to me? i never talked to you.
Do you have to be so inmature, and live only from a fun-point-of view?
why cant you be like me, be solom and cool?
can you not see that life is too short, for you to do what ever you aught?
dont u know that at a stage in life, we have to face fear?
that's the only way you wont get scared.

come and hold my hand, i'll lead you to your destiny,
to help you become as powerful as me.
please try harder to reach my hand,you wouldnt want this to be the end
im leaving you now as i understand, that maybe you should stay here and never
leave your friends
you are a child that will never grow up,
you will never beat me with only a pure heart.
 
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