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I've been reading all of the battles for a while, and decided that I wanted to take a shot at it.

Rules: The same as posted in the rules thread, no godmodding, powerplaying, etc. And try to stay active as well.

Location: Pretty simple, just an open field at around midday.

My Character:

Name: Sophia

Age:17

Appearance: Sophia is pretty small in stature, only standing at 5'2". She has black hair, always up in a ponytail, and dark blue. Her outfit is a simple black and white t-shirt and dark pants, designed for maximum mobility.

History: Every single member of her family before had been trained to be warriors in some form or another. So when she announced her plans to be a student of books, not swords, her parents were enraged. Her mental abilities would make her a powerful fighter, they told her. But her mind was made up.
Until the day they attacked. Monsterous beasts with immence strength and unbeatable speed ravaged the town where they Sophia and her family were living. The townspeople, including her parents and older brother, were wiped out. She had been spared from the carnage because she was away at a university, studing.
She blamed herself for the destruction of her home and family. If she had trained in the art of the warrior, she would have been there to save them with what her parents called her"godly gift." So with her dead brother's sword in hand and determination in her heart, she set out to become a great warrior in the tradition of her family.

Personality: She can come across as both sweet and polite, and rude and sarcastic, depending on her mood. Most of the time, she is nice, insightful, and resourceful. She is often unsure of herself, but this instability comes out as bold claims and bragging instead of self reflection. Her mouth gets her into most of her fights.

Ability: She uses her psychic powers to both compensate for her lack of muscle and form objects out of mental power. These include barriers and weapons. She uses her skill imaginitively in order to outwit an opponent. She can also hear other's thoughts, giving her a slight edge in reaction time, even if she can't see the opponent.

Weapons: She wields two short swords: one made out of her psychic energy and the other being her brother's sword.

Other: She really likes muffins, especially chocolate chip ones.

Please bear with me, this is my first try at a fight...but don't go easy either!

Also, constructive criticism from non-participants would be greatly appreciated in order to facilitate improvement.
 

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I'll battle you. I'll have my temp up whenever I can get on the computer today (right now I'm on my Wii Internet Channel and I can't copy and paste on it).
 

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Here it is.
~My Character~
Name: Canis Lupus

Age:12

Physical description: Wolf ears, hands, tail, and teeth, everything else is human.Brown hair, gray, lonely eyes with gray skin. Wears a midnight blue cloak with the bottom half ripped off, dirty jeans, black gloves, and cloth shoes.

Personallity: Loyal and quiet, gets the job done even at the cost of his life. Devoted to his friends. Known to be very stubborn.

Bio: A werewolf boy trained as an assasin since he could pick up a sword. One of very few in existence, he thrives to recreate the race of werewolves. As a baby his father, King Arthus, cast him aside and left him to die where he was then raised by a sage by the name of Saleh. At age 3, he was then taught how to use light magic and at the age of 7, found him dead because of Arthus's army. He then learned the art of assasination and later killed 6 of the 7 commanding generals under Arthus. His goal is to kill his father and take the throne, leading to a grand reform of their race. His small army consists of Joeseph(archer), Meena(mage), Yujil(swordmaster), and Elizabeth(healer).

Skills: Assasination, summoning, light magic

Weapon: a rogues knife and throwing needles for prescision attacks.

Secret attacks: Pin cushion: Canis runs around the enemy and strikes them in every direction possible with throwing needles.
Ryukin: Canis duplicates himself and makes an army of clones to attack the enemy.
Lightning speed slash: Runs around enemy with untrackable speed and slashes them with his knife.
Final flight: Rushes toward enemy(ies) and covers them with his cloak (the inside is like a paralyzer) then jumps into the air and performs a combination of Pin cushion and a Piledriver.
Howl to the heavens: happens only at night. Canis transforms into a werewolf only if his hood comes off.
Finisher: Power of the Werewolf: (Howl to the Heavens must be activated) Canis holds the enemy by the neck clawing them to death and slam them 50 ft into the ground.
Secondary Finisher: The crying earth: (near death state) The enemy hears an eerie moan and as Canis walks closer to the enemy, he/she sees the ghosts of all the people they have killed in their life time and are attacked by them.
 

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Great! I guess I'll start!

It was a beautiful day outside, and a gentle breeze mingled with the warm midday sun. The combination of sensations was pleasant, and Sophia thought to herself that the weather couldn't get any better. A perfect day for an outdoor picnic. Now if only I could find something to eat. As she strolled down the dirt path cutting through the field, she tried to reach out with her power in order to find a living creacher that could become her picnic lunch. Instead, she felt the incoming presence of a person instead. Well, not exactly a person. The aura felt like that of both a human and a beast. She drew one of her swords as a precaution against this newcomer. At first, she decided to continue walking at a faster pace to avoid any conflict, but curiousity overcame her, and she chose to stop and wait to see if the person would make any contact with her.
 

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"Aaah, man it's nice out today!" Canis said to his friends as they were walking on a trail toward a field. He heard the sound of someone walking his way. "You guys hide, I'll scout ahead." Canis said to his comrades. He snuck along the side of the road and saw a teenaged girl, wielding a sword. He held his hands up in the air, trying not to start a fight. "Greetings fellow traveler. It sure is a nice say out isn't it?" He said with a grin.
 

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"Um..yes it is." she replied. She was taken slightly aback by his ears and tail, but was also pleased by the fact that her sense had been correct. He seems to be trying to avoid a fight, she thought. " So, what are you doing outside on this fine day?" His polite demeanor might be a ruse. I'd better stay on my guard.
 

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"I'm just traveling with some friends to a nearby town. Do you know how far the nearest town is?" Canis said. "By the way, what's your name?" Canis saw the fact that she was pulling out her sword, so he went back a couple steps.
 

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" The next town is about two days ahead. And my name is Sophia. What's yours?" She watched as he stepped back a little. Is he going to attack me? If he is, he better hurry up. She glared intently at him, waiting for his next move.
 

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"My name is Canis Lupus. Two days won't take too terribly long if we can get our wagon fixed. Thanks for the info." Canis said as he put his hand in his pocket, ready to strike with his needles. I have a feeling she thinks I'm hostile so she'll attack soon enough or back down.
 

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What if it is like, a sandwich or something?...He seems to be tensing up, so I doubt it is something innocent like that.As soon as his hand went towards his pocket, she sprang into action. She materialized her other sword into her left hand and dashed towards Canis with one sword raised. and the other guarding her body. "Whatever you are trying to do, it is not going to hurt me!" she shouted.
 

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Canis quickly jumped backward, throwing needles at Sophia. After the needles were thrown, he went in for a quick slash with his knife. "So your not as peaceful as I thought, hostile or not I'm not willing to kill you. I still won't hold back though." Canis said as he rushed past Sophia.
 

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OCC: That is an AWESOME song, one of my favorites in FF.
IC: She was caught off guard by the needle barrage flying towards her. She blocked a couple of the needles with her sword, but felt the sting of 3 that she had missed. As she looked down to pull them out, she saw Canis about to slash her with his knife. The blade grazed past her, and she felt another shot of pain in her arm. I need to focus, she thought. Hmm, sometimes simple tricks can be the most effective. As Canis ran by, she made a small, invisible barrier right at his feet. She watched him dashed toward it, hoping it would trip him up.
 

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Canis tripped on the ground, a needle stabbing through his left leg. "I won't let this minor wound hold me back." He said as he pulled it out and threw it at her. "RYUKIN!' A dozen clones appeared behind Canis, lined perfectly. Each clone grabbed one another turning into a human chain. Canis threw the chain towards Sophia and the link broke. The clones scattered across the sky, throwing a barrage of needles at her. As soon as they touched the ground, each clone threw 25 needles. A total ammount of 250 needles surrounded Sophia. "Pin- Cushion!"
 

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She side stepped as he threw her trip wire back at her. She heard him shout "RYUKIN!" and clone himself. The clones linked together and were thrown into the air. "What the...?" she said as a massive amount of needles flew toward her. She mentally form a barrier of energy above her that ended up acting as a pin cushion. She flinched a little as she saw the number of needles that could have hit her. This guy is serious. She threw her newly form pin cushion back at the clones and then formed a giant needle. "Take this!" she yelled, tossing the needle at the real Canis.
 

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"Ryukin!" Canis said as a clone appeared in front of him. The clone willingly jumped toward the needle and made it drop to the ground. Canis jumped from behind the clone and went to stab at Sophia. "I don't want to have to kill you, but if I must..." Canis said as he held a knife to Sophia's neck.
 

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She quickly formulated a plan as he pressed his knife against her neck. She formed a field of energy between her and Canis, shoving him backwards with the barrier. "Let's see you try!" she shouted back. The Sophia laid a sheet of energy on the ground around her and stood defensively with her swords, waiting for him to make his next move.
 

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Canis was shoved backward by a sudden defensive energy. He laid on the ground, with needles purging through his body. He was playing dead, hoping for Sophia to attack him so he could do one of his deadly counters. I know you'll either attack me or leave me here, thinking I was dead. The problem with this plan is that even though the needles weren't near any vital organs, he could still bleed to death. He waited on the ground, waiting for her to strike.
 

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Is he dead? she thought to herself. Wow, that wasn't even meant to kill him. I guess I should go over and check. She started to walk over to Canis, but then she stopped. Couldn't I just check from over here? She summoned yet another giant needle and tossed it toward him from a distance.
 

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Canis heard the large needle coming his way and whispered "Ryukin.", making an exact copy of himself in that spot while Canis dug a tunnel underneath it. Crap, I thought for sure that would work. Canis continued digging his tunnel, leaving a bunch of needles sticking out behind him in case Sophia decided to use this route. He dug upward and he was in an area of tall grass. He peeked from the grass and saw Sophia was about 20 feet away. He summoned up another clone and had it stay in the tiunnel, just in case. Canis then crawled closer to Sophia until he was only 10 feet away, and threw a bunch of needles at her legs.
 

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Her needle attack pierced through Canis's clone, and it shifted off of its place, revealing a hole. Oh crap...where is he? She turned around to try and spot her opponent. Just as she turned, a swarm of needles flew toward her legs. Thankfully, she was facing sideways toward the needles, and only a few pierced her leg. She painfully brushed them off and finished turning toward Canis. What to do, what to do? Ah, I've got it! The field she had set up on the ground was still in place, and Canis was in range. She jerked the field up violently, using it as a platform to throw him into the air. Then Sophia sent power into her legs and jumped toward him, swords at the ready.
 
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