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Well, as far as the bad writing, I was thinking more in reference to bloodlines and the other hand-held games that weren't handled very well. I thought they could have done a lot more with Altair in Bloodlines and even Maria. She's only in a few scenes and I personally would have like to see how...

Yes I did take it out of context. Sorry for being such a bi-polar ass about it. I was not in my best of moods this morning and it was wrong of me to take it out on you. So, for what it's worth, I apologise for my foolish outburst. I still like your work and would hope you keep it up.

You thought my critiques were annoying? How offensive! I took the time to read over all that you had posted, review it, and post my thoughts because I believed that you had some real skill, and your first thought is that it was annoying you, rather than being helpful? And who are you to think my...

If you don't mind, I'll continue doing what I do. "He reflected on his near-confrontation with the turcopoliers and was glad that Ralph arrived just in time to stop him from drawing his sword from its sheath and slicing them." Nothing terribly wrong in here. I can come to my own...

I think I see where you are coming from. The way you are writing it is to assume that the Auditore family have always been in Florence and that Domenico was just the first Assassins to integrate with them and create the first Auditore/Assassin lineage. However, as written by Domenico: "From...

So if they are to be related, the chronology would be something like this: 1191A.D. - 1290A.D. -- Altair's bloodline mixes with the existing Auditore bloodline in Florence, thus allowing future generations to be of Altair and Alessandro's relation. -- Memebers of this existing Auditore...

Let me start by saying, nice work. You have done more that I could have at 12! However, I did notice some things that I would like to bring up. I ask that you welcome these criticisms and take no offense. A good writer always looks to gain from the opinions of their work. First Post In the...

Hello everyone! This is actually my first post here. I was encouraged, just as many others were, by the support this forum gives to those trying their hand at creative writing, fanfic and whatnot and so I decided to join up and give it a whirl. I don't write too much, but I think I'm okay at...