So having been on Zarin I Yehudahi fanfic, I saw that you posted quite a bit on what should be done to it to make it better. I'm guessing you like looking over chapters and pointing out things that can make it better? Cause if you want you can do that for my fanfic too. I don't mind having someone tell me if there's anything to fix.
Other then that aside your new so tell me about yourself :) like movies, games, etc...
http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/157418-sakura-secret-mission-naruto-fanfic.html here is the link if your interested. If not that's okay too :)
Other then that aside your new so tell me about yourself :) like movies, games, etc...
http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/157418-sakura-secret-mission-naruto-fanfic.html here is the link if your interested. If not that's okay too :)