Congratulation, you made me hate Kingdom Hearts more than I already have. Your RP is terrible.
Or to put it nicely... You haven't wrote enough to have some form of overall plot [and no, being plunged into Hollow Bastion is not a plot]. The fact that there is so many spelling mistakes like 'hearless', 'possiable', 'Hollow Bastin' makes it unbearable. Thankfully, there isn't the word 'sence' in there, otherwise I wouldn't have been this kind.
Write a lot. Get your ideas down. Plan the fcuk out of it. Don't post something that you conjured up in five minutes on Microsoft Word.