For whatever reason, I can't PM you. So I'll VM you. Your changes are decent and in fact are a tinsy-bit flattering considering I didn't actually think you'd do it. Not that you were incapable, or whatever, I just personally didn't think I could get anyone to edit their temps. Your temp is cool, however, I'll be more than a little vocal if I spot anything I don't like, RP wise. This goes for anyone else reading this VM, let's just RP and have fun.
Oh and the position for leader of the baddies has been filled ^^