Well that's cool. I don't know much about syntax(mainly because I don't know what it is xD).
Yeah, I've posted a bunch of them, but most of them are pretty shitty lol. I started posting them as soon as I started writing, and for the first year, my poetry was the noobish 3-12-liner x.x. But as I got more serious about my poetry, the more I was able to make it more readable and clear in meaning.
Here are a couple links to my latest poetry(more will come once i get the ideas lol)
http://forums.khinsider.com/poetry/151288-single-star.html
http://forums.khinsider.com/poetry/152975-rain-rain-go-away.html
http://forums.khinsider.com/poetry/143540-too-little-too-late.html
And a few that I cant find the threads to, but can put in spoilers ^^
These are my most recent from the last three months xD