>X3 Thankies!
Vent all you need to buddy ;3
And holy cow, you've got something there too! (And I'm sorry Megatokyo pulled you away from the Bleach story ;-
Your writing is not gonna settle easily (I've been there) For now, it's best to write down every idea that comes into your head, and when burnt out, take a break, a day at least, and then come back to it.
From an awesome English professor, "You have to let your work simmer, set it on a low fire and let it tender with a new idea every now then - then turn up the heat and synthesis it into something great!"
Now, when this starts banging on school work, that's when it can get really sticky, and you'll have to drop it like its hot, but when you come back to it, you'll find you have many more other ideas to work with, sometimes even more so from after a burn out.
Publishers give thier writers years to come up with thier stories, its a time consuming process, but the ride is worth more than half the trip! ^_^
On that note, it takes a while to settle, it really does, heck I wrote all through middle school and settled about halfway through high school, though at times, I don't feel settled myself since I jump around a lot in the story XD
And then there's writers block x.x but only time can fix that >_<