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The Midnight Channel

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I thought I'd try something new and a little simpler than my usual style.

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lightninglp.png


V2
lightninglp-1.png


Tell me what y'all think.

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Nice Shading, Good balance of effects,and it has that paprus look to it that I like... do you think you could do a tag for me like that?
 

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Nice Shading, Good balance of effects,and it has that paprus look to it that I like... do you think you could do a tag for me like that?

I can try xD

If theres a specific stock you want, PM me. Just make sure its not shitty/LQ.
 

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I'll see if I can find a good one alright? I'll let you know via VM or PM depending on what you accept...
 

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Eclair means lightning in french. There's supposed to be an accent above the "e" but the font didn't have that specific "e".
 

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Damn, i wanted to be the first to use this stock :eek:, oh well.

You've got a great execution of the subtleties. While I like it, i'd urge some contrasting and take down the washout effect some. I'm impartial on the text, overall, nice work.
 

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i like and can see what you're trying to do with this and looks good so far.
but, i think the checkers should go and you should just paste the stock vertically flipped in the splatters and it may look a lot more natural.
 

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the checkers are too sharp compared to the overall lp. other than that, this is great. simplicity wins
 

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^Simple sharpen tool (dear god never use the filter xD), also there is NOTHING wrong with 'monotone stance' when it comes to the light touch.

The focal should be stronger, and distinguished as far as the old burn/dodge maneuver. After that, not much else you can do o:
 

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I think the first version is better. The second one's not bad, but it's a little too simple.
 
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